Lament - Comments

ohgod, I read the prequel and all of the sequel in less than three hours and I am so stoked for your next update! The story is flawlessly written and you should really consider having it published.

Noo, I don't want them to be apart any longer! Alphonse is an idiot, granted I do see his point, but he is an idiot. I think that being near Lily and Faerie would help him, not hinder him. But then again it is another time. It makes me happy to know that Alphonse still want a life after all this with Faerie, but he shouldn't have followed her, not let her create more distance between them. Wonderful chapter, though, keep it up (:

this was incredibly sad, it made me want to cry for hours.
i really hope that she and alphonse get to have a life together.

Aw poor alphonse. Faerie is being very strong for doing this and i admire her as a person. if she existed she could have been a role-model to women everywhere! lol!
and those who read this probably feel the same lol

aww.
seriously? :(

i feel so bad for alphonse...
:/

oh my goodness, I loved that last chapter.
Although I want Faerie and Alphonse to be together, I can't help feel that love is nothing without a little fight. I'm sucker for dramatic stories. And this one just took the big cheese.
ahh, bravo :]

I feel like my heart was going to hyperventilate. I love the relationship between Faerie and Alphonse! It's so depressing and tragic, but in an awesome way :)

amazing update, really.
I can't wait for more <3

I wanna know if Jaedo has visited Glenn at all ^_^
I liked it, i can't remember which paragraph or which line for that matter, but there was a apart where you typed something like "because are because we are not english" it could have been a misread on my part but i picked it up lol
sorry if it isn't.
can't wait until faerie gets some alone time with alphonse ^_^

Oh wow.
I just spent most of my evening reading Soliloquy and Lament.
So much going through my mind.

But for now, I'll just say how heartbroken I feel when I think about Faerie and Alphonse not being together. About her even considering marrying someone else. It's painful.
But you know, in a good way.

ooh.. Princess huhs? (:

love the update!!

<3! :D

I fall in love with this story again everytime I read new updates. Simply wonderful. I cannot believe that Lily refused to go to the party, but I cannot wait to see how Alphonse reacts when Faerie talks with him. The Green Faerie always seems to pop up, I liked how you keep building on his character(i.e. giving more detail on his clothing each time we meet him).

I like it. i like how you describe the characters longing for Alphonse and i especially like how her personality is becoming more complex and "evolving" as the story progresses. i DO wish that Alphonse will return soon. he's my favourite character ^_^

oh.... my goodness. i have no words to describe how i feel when i read this wonderfully heartbraking story.

i like the new chapter good suspence build up, with a some what of a cliff hanger. so update please

yes!
you updated!!
i've waited so damn long for this one. :D

but it's worth it.
would Jules become the bad guy though? :(

<3!

Jules does seem evil, and I love the person above me's linking of the Green Faerie and the thing from Jeepers Creepers.
I also loved your description of the Green Faerie. I cannot believe Jules and Faerie kissed!

"I could tell that he meant what he said, but at that moment a slight sliver of fear passed through me. I couldn't tell why it was it was there, all I knew was it was."
Oh my god. Jules is evil. Yep. He's like a crazy mass murderer or something...I knew it.

Oh and um. This is probably awkward. Did Alphone and Faerie ever...you know...do it? If they did then I feel like a total idiot for missing that.

P.S. The Green Faerie definitely reminds me of that thing in Jeepers Creepers.

I've been long obsessed with this sequel!

double post >_>