Lament - Comments

Your writing is beautiful. I completely adore it. This is, along with Soliloquy, becoming my favorite stories around =]

Ps.- Alphonse is back!

I have a feeling the Green Faerie knows plenty more about everything that is going on than even Wren Morgenstern does. The writing was extraoridinarly beautiful, I love everything you write - I can tell you have great passion for writing. No doubt this could be a published book. You should send all of these off to the publishers. I know I would buy them all.

oh oh he knows her name!?! i cannot wait to read more!

Oh my goodness! I am so excited for the next part! The little green man is so intriguing in all of his mistery!

Dear Lord.
I absolutely love that this story is only four chapters in, and the plot is already so mysterious and thrilling. I love this story. I mean it.

yay
excellent update
: )

this story just makes me sad. and that last paragraph where the green man appeared out of nowhere- i got chills. for real.

That was an evil cliff hanger. EVIL. If you wait too long to update I will die from shock. Really. I WILL DIE.

Anyway, moving on. I don't know why, but I seem to like Alphone a lot better now that he has grown distant and cold. It sort of keeps the sexual tension going on haha. If they were all lovey-dovey for all of Lament, I think it might have been boring. I mean, nothing you write can possibly be boring...but with the "new" Alphonse, things will be much, much more interesting. Especially with the dashing Jules twisting things around :]

I loooved the part when Faerie thought, Damn. I don't think we'veever heard her swear before.

I really can't imagine living in the 18th century. I wouldn't be able to handle pretending I had no mind at all. And this makes me wonder what Faerie would be like if she were living in the present. She would totally kick ass.

Don't worry about it being overdue. The language was immensely amazing. Just wonderful, really. Thank you for updating though. (:

please update, i miss this so much<3

I love the story! It makes me wanting more! :D

I adore this story! Alphonse is back!!! I can't wait to see how this progresses!!

I need more!

oh my gosh! i can not believe he is back! i actually gave a tiny squeak while reading it, i had to re-read the part where he was introduced! pretty much shocked me there! ...i hope he still loves her though...after all they went through

LE GASP!

Alphonse is back! I can't believe it, I have absolutely no idea what is going to happen next, and that makes me love this story even more!

well, i can honestly say i did not see that ending coming in the chapter.

Al is back! Al is back! Ignore my new nickname for him.
It sparked when Faerie stuttered and she said 'Al....about the Philosopher's Stone'
Ahaha, it's very fitting though hey? :D
In other news, great chapter. Ahahaha.
I'm pretty much altogether in love with this storyline

this is great, keep it up! you are an awesome writer

Ahh! Alphonse is back! I went into shock when he was introduced to the crowd.

GASP! I cannot believe he's back, as such a seemingly vile, cold man! Amazing, as usual. Thank you for the update :D

Chapter 3 was amazing. You are a great writer.