October 10th, 2007 at 08:37am
I believe that's the title of the chapter. This story's for all my incomplete drabbles, that's why it's "Everything's Incomplete". :mrgreen:
- The Way:
- One thing, though: I think 'just a bit closer' would be a better title. The current one is okay, but if you must forgive me, it sounds a bit 'emo' and 'whiny.'
So, yeah. Basically loved everything else.
Thankyou so much for the comment though XD. Your reviews are always one of the best I get, the advice you give each time is incredibly useful.
I instantly understood everything- why she was feeling this way and why it would be horrible. You explained it so well in the first paragraph... the steps of Billie's music. (or fits might be a better word)
I love this so much.. a beautiful peace.
I wish that you'd write more often. You're officially one of my new favorite authors.
And I'm really skeptical about those sort of things.