The Alley - Comments

bats_are_my_army:

this is cool

the whole alley idea is really different from what you usually read on mibba

the line "Trust me you didn’t want to be ‘the kid who told about ‘The Alley’. The last one was in the 90’s and she had to leave the state, no one ever heard of her again" is funny but like banished from the state!? they must have had to get in some hardcore government agents for that one :)

i wish our school had an alley

we could be alley buddies XD

Glad you like it Phil!!

You do good reviews i likes it!

Yesh hxc core agents lol, that would be cool XD

SolarPoweredGenie:

You should 'continue' :)
I 'subscribed' so you had 'better' continue :)
I love 'it'.
'You're' a really good writer.
Except for all of 'these' things :)
Lawl. Don't worry about me.
I like the sound of this 'alley' thing.
I want one.
xox
More soon please :)

'Thanks' for that
I 'will' go back and get rid of some of 'these' things for you XD

And there will be more of this as soon as i finish exams!!

this is cool

the whole alley idea is really different from what you usually read on mibba

the line "Trust me you didn’t want to be ‘the kid who told about ‘The Alley’. The last one was in the 90’s and she had to leave the state, no one ever heard of her again" is funny but like banished from the state!? they must have had to get in some hardcore government agents for that one :)

i wish our school had an alley

we could be alley buddies XD

this was good i really liked this
write more and if you dont ill eat you for breakfast
very good
love ya

Chyes, very cool. INteresting story, characters, idea. :] And written well.

*subscribed*

Its good, very well written.

More soon, please!

You should 'continue' :)
I 'subscribed' so you had 'better' continue :)
I love 'it'.
'You're' a really good writer.
Except for all of 'these' things :)
Lawl. Don't worry about me.
I like the sound of this 'alley' thing.
I want one.
xox
More soon please :)

Trust me you didn’t want to be ‘the kid who told about ‘The Alley’. The last one was in the 90’s and she had to leave the state, no one ever heard of her again.
hehe, that made me giggle!!
The Alley sounds pretty funny, like where the mysterious outcasts of the school hang out and act all mysterious and rebellious :P
I don't know if thats what you were going for, but thats kinda the impression that i got
I'm interested to see what will happen to this Jamie guy tho

ierogasm:

surrealism:

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lame comment. ooh -squeals- songfic i likey (: it creepts me out a tad but its rad... stupid dirty emos -scoffs- -giggle- im so proud of yew -gushes-

Oh well at least its a comment

I might still do the song fic not sure

And thanks...i think *giggle*

surrealism:

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lame comment. ooh -squeals- songfic i likey (: it creepts me out a tad but its rad... stupid dirty emos -scoffs- -giggle- im so proud of yew -gushes-

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My own first comment *sigh*

Please tell me what you think, what you like not just 'more' or 'tis good' please

Good/bad i dont mind!!

Emma xoxo