I Don't Want It, I Just Need It. - Comments

  • HopefulRissa

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    Holy shit, were those Converge lyrics as a ringtone? I think I just passed out.
    And omg Gallows and Every Time I Die... That's gonna be a fucking blast.

    And no, I don't think the Oli chapter is messing up the Paris thing. I think it helps create tension. Something that you're really phenomenal at.
    May 17th, 2009 at 09:26pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    Everythin’s changin’ an’ ye not ‘ere

    Awww, poor Oli. Poor Verity. :( But yayyyy, the little one is on the way! Haha.
    And I don't think you're ruining Paris with the Oli chapters. It adds to the suspense. Plus, I want to know what happened to make Oli and Verity break up, and that's gonna be in the Oli chapters, and so I could never hate them. Haha.
    May 17th, 2009 at 09:11pm
  • vicky

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    pfft. double post. ignore this :)
    May 17th, 2009 at 08:38pm
  • vicky

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    I do see what you mean, cause i kinda favour the present chapters over the past ones for some reason (although i do like those from olis pov) I seem to crave a present chapter from Olis perspective :) i loved the update though x
    May 17th, 2009 at 08:38pm
  • xAbiiCakes

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    sorry, i ment chapter 24

    xxx
    May 15th, 2009 at 04:56pm
  • xAbiiCakes

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    i'm on chapter 23, yea (not read it yet)
    & i'm confused with all this Hayley thing.
    because one moment Oliver's saying he loves Vee.

    then i find out he's got a girlfriend? haha
    i'm confused D: & btw i am slow and dumb >:]

    and i do love the story (L)!!!
    May 15th, 2009 at 04:53pm
  • Dolls A Train Wreck

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    ah paris!
    the city of love.. right?
    lol
    May 15th, 2009 at 02:32am
  • xAbiiCakes

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    i love it :)

    xxx
    May 15th, 2009 at 12:09am
  • formerlyknownas

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    How did you know this is exactly what I needed?!
    Okay, so I'm confused. Did the postcard say something? Or has that not been revealed yet?
    I loved Oli in this chapter, so thoughtful! Love thoughtful Oli. Haha you make him so good, and then there's me, making him into the world's biggest asshole.
    I like your Oli better. :D Can't wait for the next chapter, and then the chapter after that. I want to read more about Paris! And know what Verity did/will do before Oli left/while he's gone!
    May 14th, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • Syn_Sex

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    omg I want to know SO BADLY what had happened between them...so badly...ugggghh...

    were the roses from oliver? and did I get it right that there was a picture in the roses (sorry it's I'm german and not perfect at english... :D)
    May 14th, 2009 at 03:37pm
  • doesn'tbelieveinlove

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    i love this story so much<33333333333333 i can't wait for another update.
    May 14th, 2009 at 02:58pm
  • cherryc0la

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    *tear
    May 14th, 2009 at 08:03am
  • formerlyknownas

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    oh god. is she going to leave while he's on tour? without telling him?
    or did she cheat on him, and jake knows, and she hasn't told him yet?
    i want answers! but most of all, i want PARIS! so stoked for next chapter. :D
    and when you told me that i was going to get my oli/verity fix soon, i didn't realize you meant as soon as i checked my email and found an update. haha
    May 12th, 2009 at 10:02pm
  • watching lights

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    Who loves Curtis Ward? I do ! lol
    Oh they are so still in love
    And I can't wait for Paris!

    Sorry I've been quite slacking on my reviews.
    But damnit I love this story, update soon!
    &I think even my british slang is getting better C:
    May 11th, 2009 at 06:30am
  • formerlyknownas

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    gahhhhh i love curtis! :D
    i really have no words, this story was sofa king intense. surriously.
    btw, there's a snake in my backyard. i took precious time out of my hunting (aka waiting for jake to get home so i could go crying to him and beg him to get it out) to read this. feel special. hahaha
    May 8th, 2009 at 12:12am
  • Lowered_Expectations

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    Chapter 29 was kind of short, but it was so fucking good…I didn’t even notice.
    May 8th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • Syn_Sex

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    healll, yeah! curtis ward rules!!

    and Jägermeister...oh god...no comment*bad memories*

    but it's getting exiting!...I mean the story...not that it wasn't exiting before but now we're starting to find out what happenend...*cheers*
    May 7th, 2009 at 10:24pm
  • HopefulRissa

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    Oh Curtis. Sigh.
    I'm really glad that Oli and Verity are getting closer again. It's sweet.
    May 7th, 2009 at 10:06pm
  • Sarrawrr!:O

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    I liked this chapter.
    I really can't wait to find out why they were in such a bad place that made them break up and be bitter towards each other.
    At least they're kinda okay...awkward...but improving.
    Love this! Good job(:
    May 7th, 2009 at 07:49am
  • HopefulRissa

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    Oh man, Jager in small doses is bad news but a whole bottle + sleeping in a van + Cancer Bats seems like a whole mess of bad news. But bad news generally means a good time.

    Verity and Oli have a sort of heartbreaking quality. I think maybe it's because of the time jumps. It's like... I know that in the present they aren't together and something bad happened so all the love proclaimations in the past seem really sad.
    May 7th, 2009 at 12:39am