I Don't Want It, I Just Need It. - Comments

ahh i just finished reading this whole story- well the part thats up anyway, and im actually stoked i found another good oli sykes story, because most are just a pile of shit incoherant words thrown together added to a bunch of oli sykes mentions. anywho, getting a tad off track.
and is Danny Kurily not All Time Low's guitar tech? aha. therfore i think alex is most definantely Alexander Gaskarth, which just made this story a whole lot better. If not, it's still a damn good story. and i totally agree with a comment Samantha left up there ^ Curtis is damn cute in this story.
upppppdate again soon, yeah? :)

SJ Whiteley, possibly?
Gaskarth?
And I have no idea how to make a pikachu costume.
Great update, it makes me curious!

BRO!
I don't think anyone has ever gotten me down freaking pat. But you win, haha. I think you're the only person who has really understood how often I actually use the word "bro" in a conversation.
This was amazing. So I take it Verity had a thing with Alex? God, I love it.
AND DANNY! DANNY KURILYYYYY! I'm so freaking excited, because now it's like her past in LA is in her present in Europe, so freaking good, gahhhhh!
I love it. And not just because I'm now in in, because we both know I loved it before that haha. :D I'm stokedddddd!

I have a feeeeeeeeeeeeling we're going to figure out what she was supposed to tell him earlierrr. I'm so excited for the next chapter! and you probably haven't even started it yet. you should start it! RIGHT NOW. and middle it. and finish it. and post it. :D

does the rest of that name happen to be -am Gaskarth? hmm? Cuz that would certainly be unexpected.

With each chapter theres like an add on to the story about something you don't know
but it makes everthing clearer :D

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMEWRECKER!
Gahd, this can't be good. Verity would rip SJ into pieces. I hope she gets the chance to, actually. :)
I loved Curtis in this, btw. He's such a best friend, like I can't even explain it. And how Oli is acting, all depressed and desperate, and now everyone knows what Verity is capable of doing to him. Fuckinggggg great. God, like you need me to tell you one more time haha.
PARIS NEXT CHAPTER! I love the Paris chapters. I love all the all the chapters, who am I trying to kid? hahaha.

aww nooo
not SJ...
He most definitely is in trouble
I love this(:

Oh and yes, of course I'd be interested in an original.
Double comments, sorry.

Oh no. SJ. Bad news. BAD NEWS
But then again, bad news is way good.

I have to say, Sj is completely in-a-white-padded-room nuts. Psycho crazy at best. But she's entertaining and no doubt, a cool person. I enjoy a little crazy. Yet, she spells trouble in this one.

you don't even know how much I absolutely love this story.
I have probably said that before but it's epically true that it needs to be repeated.
You are too amazing!
ugh not finishing the sentences are annoying me though...
you do it for a reason, I know...
haha I had to go to that translator.com to figure out what they said.
Can't wait till the next update.

I just read this entire story in two days! I fell in love!
Ahhh I love this=) Update!!

This chapter made me want waffles lmfao! xD
ahh this story is really starting to get intresting, i love it :D

Ah, I don't even like sweets, but the idea of Oli eating makes it so delicious.
Wait... she's going to sleep with him?! Coolio! Or is she just playing mind games?
(I love knowing what you said. I'm taking French so yeah. That tidbit I actually learned by myself. School just doesn't teach the necessities!)

“might be a lifetime Vee, but I still remember every single inch of ye like it were a second ago”

oh man..that line right there... how can you not love that obnoxiously cocky boy after he goes and says things like that? he would leave me not only speechless, but in love with him all over again if i were her.

"He interrupted, jumping to his feet from the bench we’d been sitting on and thrusting his hand out to pull me up to join him.

I took it, hesitantly. My skin tingling as his fingers slipped between mine and my lips twitching into an awkward smile as he dragged me behind him, toward the waffle stand.
His hand held mine tightly, but his thumb was rubbing mine softly. The contrast was perfect." I love lines like this; you can not only picture it but you feel it, every bit of it. i just love this story. please update again really soon.

Oh my God. Have I mentioned yet that I'm in love with him? Because I'm so totally fucking in love with him. Holynannyshitfuck.
So that was adorable. Firstly, I was not expecting the happy birthday, but then I figured he wasn't going to be PROPOSING because that would just not be rightly timed. Then the waffle, and the Frenchhhhhh! Gah. Love it.

ooh la la

No, no, no. Don't worry about ruining the momentum. Keeping up the same pattern is best because otherwise it would throw readers off. Plus it builds suspense and curiousity with every chapter we have to wait. No bad move there. I really like getting this blast from the pasts because it helps fill in the blanks as we go. It's a nice format.
Poor, Oli. He was so drunk and she had no idea how hard it is for him, also. The thing that makes me sad is that he's so in love with her (and she in return) but he has no idea that she's going to be gone when he returns and we know all of this. It's like being able to see the future and know that someone is about to be ran over by a bus but we can't do anything about it. It hits emotion, which is an indication of great writing.
What I'm really curious about is what her and Tom were arguing over earlier. What is she going to tell Oli?

i think your momentum is fine. if you switch pace of how you do things this far into the game, that may mess us readers up more than anything. besides it's a nice change to see what was going on in oliver's head when they were together.

I like how you flip from 'Verity now' to 'Oli then'. I don't feel like it's ruining the momentum of Paris. It kind of builds anticipation, waiting to see what is going to happen. At least for me.