Great chapter. Long, but good. I could just see Ryan screaming and holding onto Brendon. Just perfection. That's all I can say about it.
August 3rd, 2007 at 11:23pm
No, he didn't vomit on Spencer, but he did vomit on the bed.
- ZooZoo Magee:
Okay.
- druscilla; insain:
Yeah. I was going to write in that Spencer called room service to change the sheets [which he did], but I just thought implying it would work.
- ZooZoo Magee:
- No one cleans up the vomit.
Just thought I'd point that out.
It says he vomits onto the other side of the bed, so I figured it probably wasn't on Spencer and rather onto the floor.
It doesn't really matter. It's a minor detail that's not imperative to the story.
Okay.
- druscilla; insain:
Yeah. I was going to write in that Spencer called room service to change the sheets [which he did], but I just thought implying it would work.
- ZooZoo Magee:
- No one cleans up the vomit.
Just thought I'd point that out.
Yeah. I was going to write in that Spencer called room service to change the sheets [which he did], but I just thought implying it would work.
- ZooZoo Magee:
- No one cleans up the vomit.
Just thought I'd point that out.