Just Keep Breathing - Comments

  • Whoaishly Lame

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    The ending was absolutely lovely! I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stories.
    Great work! Absolutely, positively awesome.
    March 23rd, 2009 at 06:30am
  • Pokemon Master.

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    I'm so sad that this is over, I almost want to cry. This is one of my favorite stories on mibba and I got so attached to it, I don't want to let go. >.< haha
    March 23rd, 2009 at 06:09am
  • FTS.brittni.

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    Awh, it's over.

    That makes me sad, and happy... at the same time. You are a wonderful writer, absolutely. It's sad to see it over, but it was a great story. You have some serious talent, girlie. Congratulations on such a successful story :)

    You AMAZE me.
    March 23rd, 2009 at 03:32am
  • your nightmare;

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    Omg, I loved thissss!
    I really wish there was going to be a sequel.
    Cant wait for yur next oli story and tom.
    Mmmm!(:
    March 23rd, 2009 at 02:15am
  • black_rose

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    amazing story written by a brilliant writer
    March 23rd, 2009 at 02:07am
  • Dolls A Train Wreck

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    Like seriously
    I am in love with your badazziling (i made that up just for you ^_^) writing!!!!!!!
    I loved it like more than I love...Poptarts (and thats a lot a love) lol
    March 23rd, 2009 at 02:02am
  • sh3nanigans

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    AWHHH! I died! That was the best ending ever. This has been one of the most amazing stories I've read on here... I hardly read any, but I'm happy I started this one. xD

    +@#$%^&*( excited for your new stories.

    I... will miss this one though.
    March 23rd, 2009 at 01:18am
  • daydreamz

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    :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

    I WISH THERE WAS GOING TO BE A SEQUEL! :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

    This wasn't lame, mkay? :)
    March 23rd, 2009 at 12:45am
  • littlemisslonely

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    Aw, I'm sad it's over.

    BUT, I'm happy it has a happy ending.

    8)
    March 23rd, 2009 at 12:29am
  • Tasssshhh

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH
    i'm so happy.
    it was so beautifully "happily ever after" at the end.
    i mean i'm gutted that it's over and all - but i'm so glad it was happy!
    :):):):):)
    Loved it.
    Let me know when you post your new Oli story?
    xxx
    March 23rd, 2009 at 12:07am
  • daydreamz

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    Aw, I'm so sad to see this story coming to and end :(

    I can't wait for an epilogue... If there is one.

    PEOPLE, START COMMENTING THIS!!!!!!!!!!
    *big cheesy smile*
    March 22nd, 2009 at 11:41pm
  • Noxious

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    this story wasss amazing :]
    Epilogue pleassse? :]
    March 22nd, 2009 at 11:40pm
  • HyperXcore

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    Well done on finishing the story... still waiting for the epilogue tho :P
    This is a seriously good story :D
    But ending on them taking a break and Oli leaving would just be tragic
    March 22nd, 2009 at 10:02pm
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Oi Oli! He's so completely whipped and he has to leave her behind! What a troublesome mix-up.
    I have to say, chapter 34 and 35 were really hard to read. Not because they were bad or anything, but you really feel for Oli when reading those chapters specifically.
    Really good job!
    (Congradulations on finishing a whole story!)
    March 22nd, 2009 at 09:09pm
  • proverbial sunrise.

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    this is a really good...
    cant wait for the epilogue!!
    March 22nd, 2009 at 08:41pm
  • X abidab X

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    I can't believe it's the end D=
    thank goodness there is still an epilogue to go!
    but after that, I will seriously miss this story *tear*
    excellent update, amazing ending... basically it has been the most brilliant, fantastic, well-written story ever =]
    and congrats in finishing it
    but....
    EPILOGUE NOW! pwease >.<
    tehe
    March 22nd, 2009 at 08:08pm
  • drop dead vanity

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    bsjduyzjct!! Amazing ending!!
    I really really really liked it!!
    can't wait for the happy epilouge:]
    March 22nd, 2009 at 06:48pm
  • Tasssshhh

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    I didn't cry!
    And for that you are INSANELY lucky.
    I will beat you down if there is no epilogue though - that chapter was cute, and sad, and Oli was lovely - but i swear...if he comes off tour and something goes awry in this epilogue i will not read it. i will rewrite it myself! Lol.

    This story was amazing.
    x
    March 22nd, 2009 at 12:40pm
  • Courtney Smile

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    :'(
    its over

    but cant wait for the epilogue!
    this story was stellar
    March 22nd, 2009 at 11:03am
  • FTS.brittni.

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    Yes, I am a subscriber, because you are wonderfully great!

    I cannot wait for the AMAZING epilogue *hint hint*

    I loved this story, you are a spectacular!
    March 22nd, 2009 at 08:35am