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  • Courtney Smile

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    i love it i love it
    oh, it is love

    a sequel? hoorayy
    March 20th, 2009 at 11:08am
  • sh3nanigans

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    awhhhhhhhhh xD
    they do love eachother. lots & lots.

    that was so sweet &... nice.
    hahhh; it was really good.
    just like thos whole story.
    one of my favorites, really.
    March 20th, 2009 at 03:02am
  • screamedlullaby

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    aww.
    :)
    they are so freaking adorable together.
    i vote epilogue (thought you didnt ask opinions :P )
    cause if it was a sequel it would just drag on, ya know?
    March 20th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • Hannah Maree;

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    aww, they love each other =D
    March 20th, 2009 at 02:01am
  • daydreamz

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    This didn't suck!

    I loved it :D
    March 20th, 2009 at 12:12am
  • Burn.Me.Down

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    So I just read all the chapters today and I have to say this is an amazing story!!!

    Cant wait for the next update!
    March 19th, 2009 at 09:20pm
  • X abidab X

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    ahhh...I can breathe a sigh of relief now ^^
    thank goodness Oli has a second chance =]
    but if he does it again...he needs to be slapped on the face with a fish >.<

    Me hopes you feel better soon!
    March 19th, 2009 at 07:48pm
  • screamedlullaby

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    aww.
    <3
    March 19th, 2009 at 02:42pm
  • Dolls A Train Wreck

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    If he messes up again... someone gunna have to kick his balls in
    MORE UPDATES ^^
    March 19th, 2009 at 11:33am
  • Courtney Smile

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    i loved it as always <3
    March 19th, 2009 at 07:32am
  • FTS.brittni.

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    AH! Love the story! You're a great writer :D
    March 19th, 2009 at 07:08am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    I very much enjoy reading this story. I was like "Gah. I'm so tired." but I had to check my inbox for emails from school (because my teachers are wierd like that and give out homework spontaneously). And then I saw 'Just Keep Breathing' and "YEAH!"... but then I fell out of bed. Which kind of hurt but I should be used to that by now.

    But anyways, YEAH! She took him back!
    March 19th, 2009 at 07:07am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    I know you don't like this chapter, but I have to say I really enjoyed it.
    Though I have to say I may have a bit of distaste for Oli, though.
    I think this chapter capture emotion very well. Escpecially the parts when she sees Oli and then also when she is taking the shots.
    It's not the type of anger that most would think of if they caught their boyfriend cheating, but disappointment. Because we all knew, especially Elle, that Oli was bound to mess up- she just really wanted him not to.

    It's a bittersweet chapter, I think.
    March 19th, 2009 at 12:44am
  • Hannah Maree;

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    it has to be a relief to not have to hide their relationship anymore, i mean i would think so.
    March 18th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • your nightmare;

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    ahh, nuh-uhhh.
    Oli always has to be a jackass.
    That fucker, tehe.
    Good update, sad thoughh.):
    March 18th, 2009 at 12:42am
  • daydreamz

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    oli=WHORE

    lmfao.
    March 17th, 2009 at 10:13pm
  • celiaeatsballz

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    aweeesomeee! & you should deff make a sequel.
    March 17th, 2009 at 08:26pm
  • X abidab X

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    *blushes* hehe, thanks for the mention >.< twas very kind of you ^^

    tut tut Oli...>=[
    Hopefully it was a bit of a misunderstanding >.<
    He was being so lovely...*tear*

    haha, wonderful update as usual =D
    I have never been disappointed with one of your updates, keep up the fabulous work =]
    March 17th, 2009 at 05:21pm
  • AkasariUchiha

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    I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is addicting : ]]
    March 17th, 2009 at 05:17pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    oli is such a douche.
    March 17th, 2009 at 04:02pm
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