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  • littlemisslonely

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    Dude, no!

    Why is Oli such a whore?

    8)
    March 17th, 2009 at 01:39pm
  • sh3nanigans

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    -_-
    stupid guy with his stupid guyness.
    March 17th, 2009 at 12:50pm
  • screamedlullaby

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    :(
    dont like what happened in the end
    but i still like your writing.
    update soon!
    March 17th, 2009 at 12:44pm
  • xXxtailzxXx

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    :O oh no he didnt hahah
    this is so awesome sorry to hear sbout your writers block i hope its all umm not blocked soon lol cant wait for the next update. :D
    March 17th, 2009 at 12:30pm
  • Tasssshhh

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    Noooooooooooooooooo!!!!
    It was all going so weeeeeeeeeeeeelllll!!!
    I'm sad now. You've made me sad.
    Horrible person.
    LOL.
    Just hurry up and resolve the drama? Kay?
    Cos i love this stuff!
    x
    March 17th, 2009 at 11:36am
  • Courtney Smile

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    i love it as always <3
    March 17th, 2009 at 10:47am
  • Noxious

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    I'm a new reader so I'm not quite caught up yet, but I just wanted to comment anyways saying that everything that I have read from this story is amazing :D
    March 17th, 2009 at 02:58am
  • daydreamz

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    manmanmanmannnnn!

    I love this story! haha :D
    March 16th, 2009 at 09:07pm
  • X abidab X

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    Noo! We don't you to have a slight blockage =O
    OK...so..Oli is leaving to go on tour fairly soonish...right?
    So..we have a bit of drama on what happens between Oli and Elle
    does she stay home, go with them...?
    and then you don't let us now what happens until....THE SEQUEL!
    major cliffhanger until the sequel =D yeh...yeh?

    Ok...basically, I just want a sequel for my benefit ^^

    but yeah....we can't have you not knowing what to write =,[

    so may all your creative thoughts gaher in your head

    oh yeh....great update by the way =]
    This is one of my favourite stories on mibba!

    and good luck on catching up with work...mehhh...stupid schools...
    March 16th, 2009 at 07:32pm
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Aw, those past two chapters were just complete and utter adorable moments. They also went really well together because of the James problem in 29 and the mending in 30. I also like how you kind of explained James' position on the whole thing a little so it didn't seem like he was just a looming torturer.
    Nice work!
    March 16th, 2009 at 07:25am
  • celiaeatsballz

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    well, since you're having trouble on what to write and you just wrote about James warning her about them being players, how about a little drama? (:
    March 16th, 2009 at 04:19am
  • Stoop Kid

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    school is more important.

    But I love it.
    The story...
    Not school.
    March 16th, 2009 at 03:34am
  • Hannah Maree;

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    this is my favorite oli story. and it's nice that james is dropping the subject but still cares because it's his sister
    March 16th, 2009 at 12:33am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesome update.
    March 15th, 2009 at 11:46pm
  • FTS.brittni.

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    Loved it! Ah, my new addiction :)

    I subscribed :D
    March 15th, 2009 at 08:19pm
  • youwillneverknow

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    this is why I'm glad I don't have an older brother to play "I Never" with... : / hahaha
    March 15th, 2009 at 08:02pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    Awww!

    He kinda asked her to be his girlfriend!

    YAY!

    8)
    March 15th, 2009 at 03:57pm
  • celiaeatsballz

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    the only solution to their problem is to have more sex.
    great update(:
    March 15th, 2009 at 03:39pm
  • screamedlullaby

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    fantastique!
    March 15th, 2009 at 12:52pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesome update.
    March 15th, 2009 at 11:39am
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