i was a reader of your "where in the wold am i" story, i loved it! and now i love this one! your characters are really intriguing and the plot just gets better! "MORE MORE MORE" ...and soon please! lol
xD i just finished reading 'Where In The World Am I?', so i went and looked at this, i think it's going to be awsome!, it may, even be better! please write some more for it x]
Oh, I would have soo listened to the dude who told her to run. And I am a bit confused? --Jack tried to kill her, the saved her from drowning? And killed his accomplice? Huh?
This is MOST DEFINITELY my favorite new one!!! I had hardly read the second paragraph and KNEW: This. Is going to be sooo good! I vote! =) Pleeeeeeaassee.