DUDDDDDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE poor piper. D: ronnie you asshole! I WAS SO EXCITED TOO. damnit. D: KEEP THEM COMING, CUTIEEE!!! <33 and i'll keep commenting(:
my ohhhh my girl.. ME LOVERS LIKE ALWAYS!!!!!!!!!!! and like.. holy shitface... they were so close.. i hate ronnie fer ruining her. but max will conquer!!! I NEED SOME PIPER AND MAX SMEXINESS!!!
OMFG! That last chapter was steamy as all hell! MORE! And for the record...I'm sorry more people don't update. This story is truly one of the best ones on this website that I've read in a fairly long time! Please please please continue to write it! I promise I'll comment on every possible update. *smile*
Ahhh don't worry about the no edittings. I think it's perfect how it is, although there are a few grammar/spelling mistakes etc. But easily fixed, right?
D: and Max and Piper. Ronnie is silly, poor Piper, though. I know exactly how she feels.... I love you too :cute: xxxx
I try to comment you every time. because i honestly love this story. it makes me so happy whenever i see you updated,. i drop whatever i was doing and read it.
So dont EVER say no one appreciates your story. because we do. or at least i do. and you should be writing for yourself. Others can motivate you, but the main goal should be you.
Damn, Ronnie! damn him to hell! we almost got the sex scene we've all desperatly wanted and she couldnt do it because he sucks! (I really love ROnnie in real life, but hes a meanie face in this story)
I hope Max isn't too mad. I mean she was a total cock block there, but she didnt mean to. Gah. i hope that didnt fuck things up. you wouldnt do that to us...would you? D:
and noooooooo! Gay people cant break up! especially cute ones like them! i will cry so hard if they break up. no lie. so make it all better...so something? just no breaking up. everyone should be happy. and everyone should be having sex. *hinthint*
Aw! Right at the juicy chapter too...but I understand. People are busy sometimes! Take me, for instance. Finals are next week, adn I'm probably going to fail all of them. Miserably. But hey! Whatever! It's all good. I'll be happy again when you update! :)
I love that, how cute. Thank you for my epic comment by the way, I appreciate the feedback. I changed that chapter 1000000 times and I'm finally happy with the outcome. But ANYWAY, I'm gonna stop blabering about my story because I'm meant to blabber about your story...Yeah (:
I thinks this chapter was great tbh, I'm glad they've found their neesh together ^-^ The next chapter sounds incredibly appealing, a teaser at best methinks.
awww. i love Max so much. hes such a sweetie. and i know! they are an awesome band. i met the bass player in a diner after Bamboozle. lmao.
and please, please tell me they arent gonna be able to do it because she think sof ROnnie or some shit like that? they need to cut that sexual tension! lmao.
I really like it so far the description is great and the ending of the chapters is always well done. I like how they got together after an argument and such. Overall I really liked it.