Time Lifts the Light - Comments

ahahaha...Ez, you rascal.

A girl with ridiculously bubbly handwriting had written "Ez Sullivan is sexy!" in large print in the middle, and another girl had responded by writing "OMG YES" underneath it.
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I would've written "Not just yes, but fuck yes!" I love it when author-ets slip in characters from their old stories into new ones. it makes me giddy inside.

Haha, sadly, the school they go to sounds like my school except without the uniforms and I am, more or less, like an Indigo. Chap 2 reminded me of when I had moved and was forced to stand infront of the class and introduce myself...but I more or less hid myself behind my teacher and whispered hello with a bright red face. haha!

And Hawkins reminds me of a boy in my guitar class, they act the exact same way...and I spare glances at him in class too. -///-
I can just tell I'm gonna be blushing and relating to this story waay too much. Haha!

Great job love!

~ Asami

A girl with ridiculously bubbly handwriting had written "Ez Sullivan is sexy!" in large print in the middle, and another girl had responded by writing "OMG YES" underneath it.
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I would've written "Not just yes, but fuck yes!" I love it when author-ets slip in characters from their old stories into new ones. it makes me giddy inside.

Haha, sadly, the school they go to sounds like my school except without the uniforms and I am, more or less, like an Indigo. Chap 2 reminded me of when I had moved and was forced to stand infront of the class and introduce myself...but I more or less hid myself behind my teacher and whispered hello with a bright red face. haha!

And Hawkins reminds me of a boy in my guitar class, they act the exact same way...and I spare glances at him in class too. -///-
I can just tell I'm gonna be blushing and relating to this story waay too much. Haha!

Great job love!

~ Asami

'"Dad!"

His eyes widened and he stepped back, looking over his shoulder'
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lol, when I read this part, I thought he was afraid of the dad,like "Oh my god, she's calling in the father!" because we ALL know how protective fathers get over their daughters with boys. rofl!! Great job Sophie love, it was truly amazing. I still wish I was as good as you! I can't wait for more in the future and its cool, i've been drooling over Maxim the past couple of weeks. lol!!

~Asami

Ooohooo!!! This looks really interesting!! Can't wait for more :D :D :D

P.S. "Ez Sullivan is sexy!" Haha that was awesome XD

I love it! I can't wait for more! XD

I can only think of one word to sum up what I want to say, so I shall unneccassarily stretch it out for my own entertainment:

UH-MAZE-INGGG!

I thought I'd be upset F&F was over, and I am, but then I read the first chapter of TLTL and was like....Ohholyshitamazingamazingamazing!
(:

I love how you started the story!
:)

Yess! I love time traveling stories (and this is no exception). It is very well written. I love the whole complexity and theories of time travel but I would never dare to try and write a story about it in fear of my head exploding!

I'm glad we didn't have to wait long for this story after F&F was finished. You definitely know how to please a fan. :mrgreen:

I really liked this. Can't wait for the next update. :]

*groans* time travel confuses me.
i like it anyway.

That was an awesome start to a new story. I love it. The beginning kind of reminded me of The Time Travelers Wife, when Clair meets Henry for the first time and he doesn't know who she is even thought they've meet (his future self has met her), and Kim and Michael reminded me of Kim and Daniel from Freaks and Geeks.

I'm totally loving the story thought. Can't wait for the next update.

I think I'd kill a boy if he unhooked my bra in the middle of class. But that's just me. I love how you snuck Ez in there!

I love love LOVE this new story. And for some reason while I was reason the first chapter, it made me want to starting writing one myself.

second chapter is hands down my favorite so far. XD
btw.

Dude, isn't Hannah Bones a HP? If she is, nice insert. And yaaaay! new story. With time travel huh? I love time travel, almost as much as I love dinosaurs. Indigo... My friends anf I are taking bets as to when certain flowers will be used as names in your stories. No one bet on Indigo though.

Definitely love it so far xD It made me laugh lol.
And Chapter Two was great as well : P
Ez reference ftw 8D
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"Ez Sullivan is sexy!"

That's great; I love how you randomly slip that in there.! =)

oh my gosh!! so good. already.

"You don't know me yet..." he whispered, more to himself than to me. Amusement flickered into his face. "Weird."

my favorite quote from the first chapter. (: idk why, but i like it.

My Bob!!! This story is like falling in love all over again...literally. Everytime I read the next chapter of any of your stories I just get drawn in and just can't help wanting more. Gah! If I could I'd ask for your autograph even if your not famous-famous...yet.