Protect Me From What I Want - Comments

addict.for.dramatics:

Aww. . . poor Gerard. I love your style of writing. It's different from anything else I've read. This may seem kind of random but have you seen the mtv clip where Billy says that he's Gerard's dad? That would make this a bit weird wouldn't it?

hehe, i have that video on my profile :P
Anyway, Billy Corgan is in this story, thats so awesome! I haven't read anything with him in it yet, so this shall be interesting :D

He couldn’t stand tears. Liquid signs of weakness. Blackmailing in bodily fluid
i love that bit
i'm definately subscribing :)

i'm so bad at writing comments....ah well.

I loved it! As far as concrit, I know that the choppy sentences make the mood, but sometimes you just have too many choppy sentences in a row, you know, and it sort of distracts me a little with the breakup of flow.

Aside from that, I'm lucky to have found a good fic here. Haha.

Aww. . . poor Gerard. I love your style of writing. It's different from anything else I've read. This may seem kind of random but have you seen the mtv clip where Billy says that he's Gerard's dad? That would make this a bit weird wouldn't it?

I made sure to subscribe. ;)

Delonna; Got Cake?:

I loved it. Great job. What a way to start this story off. This line I really loved. The thin flesh of his lips embraced a long cigarette stick and began to work its way around it almost sensually, as a very tired set of lungs craved for the toxins descending down the boy’s throat. That stuck out to me. I know you hear it alot but I really like your writing style. Different and unique.

I totally agree!

...AWESOME!! make more. I am deffinitly liking your writing style so update!

I loved it. Great job. What a way to start this story off. This line I really loved. The thin flesh of his lips embraced a long cigarette stick and began to work its way around it almost sensually, as a very tired set of lungs craved for the toxins descending down the boy’s throat. That stuck out to me. I know you hear it alot but I really like your writing style. Different and unique.

You know I love the way you write <3. And this is just stellar =].

Tbh, I've been racking my brains to come up with an original review... and I'm failing pitifully. 'It's really good' doesn't do your writing justice. Not in the slightest. I'm just really intrigued, you've drawn me into this latest version of our raven-haired boy's world. I want to know more... I can't wait for the rest. =]. Although, of course, I will, and hang onto your every word.
I just completely agree with Zodiac. You really are one of the best writers on here. I'm just really lucky I stumbled onto your fantastic stories so soon =].

Let me say one thing before I fully review:

I swear, you are one of the best writers on here.

Seriously, I envy you because of the way you form stories using powerful words that make people look them up in the dictionary just to figure out exactly what you're saying.

I loved how you threw in the song just out of no where, because it fit so well. You have a way with words, and this story is yet another piece of evidence to prove so.

I am immediately subscribing, because I really want to know what happens. :D