And the Memories Will Last Forever - Comments

  • kaylynnjaeannxox

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    awwwe. :(
    dont' let her die! not now!
    June 26th, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • surfergirl

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    She better not die or I am going to be very upset! Are you doing a sequel?
    June 26th, 2010 at 07:24pm
  • foREVer_love

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    holy crap! i was NOT expecting that! But she CAN NOT die!!! her and matt need to be together! oh man lol this update was crazy. i dont think rileys POV was all over the place. i think you wrote it really well. it was a little hectic, but she was piss drunk so it was like you were showing how her mind was racing about a whole bunch of different things. it ws really good! update ASAP because riley can not die lol
    June 26th, 2010 at 03:59pm
  • alexisxx13

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    That was an AMAZING chapterr. Loved itt!!
    Can't wait til next update!
    June 26th, 2010 at 02:57pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    He said he loves her !!!
    bout time ! =)
    too bad it took her gettin hit by a car to do so
    June 26th, 2010 at 01:53pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    Omg !
    I can believe you ends it right there !!!
    I really hope Riley's okay
    and her parents are such douche bags !!!
    can't wait until July second !
    miyah
    June 26th, 2010 at 01:51pm
  • Pyramid Head

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    This made me cry! It's about time Matt told her he loves her. Sucks it had to be after she got hit by a car though. Stupid boys!
    June 26th, 2010 at 10:08am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    Holy shit!
    I can honestly say that I didn't see that fucking coming.
    Amazing chapter
    loved it
    but she can't die,
    or I wil be sooooo... Pissed!
    June 26th, 2010 at 09:40am
  • Secrets Surround Me

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    OH MY FREAKING GOD!!! I was almost crying when she was talking about Lauren and now this? She can't die!!
    Amazing update! Hope to see another one soon!
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:50am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    omg she has to be okay!
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:47am
  • big bad wolf.

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    She better make it, Marriah! She better!
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:43am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    0.o Wha- No how why this ugh you evil writer she can't die.... I have a feeling where this is going and I hope i am wrong :[ I realy really hope that she is alright. You cant kill her nooooooo and only two more updates and they haven't really kissed yet only in her daydream....

    I really really can't wait to find out what happens next!

    Oh side comment: I loved the ninja part in your last update it reminded me of the part i wrote in my story :]
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:43am
  • Due4amiracle

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    I can't stop crying!! It sucks that we have to wait so long for an update even though its not that long at all, it just feels like it!

    Anyways...

    This last chapter in Rileys POV was good, its exactly worded and spaced and with just enough chaos that you can feel how her mind is working. Plus its exactly the way the mind thinks and acts when you are drunk so its awesome! Poor Matt though! Ahhhh!!

    Thanks for the update awesome like always!
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:16am
  • Death_to_Roses

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    Omg! Just two more left?
    Does that mean she dies?!
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:16am
  • a venom

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    she can't die
    sad how somrthing fucled up had to happen for matt to admit his feelings
    more soon?
    June 26th, 2010 at 07:33am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    i feel so bad for Riley
    i really hope she is ok =(

    on a lighter note...
    ...i really love this story =)
    June 26th, 2010 at 07:09am
  • Abandon Ahead

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    She can't die!! I want to see her and matt together, she can't fuckin die!!!!!!!!!
    June 26th, 2010 at 07:06am
  • love of vengeance

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    dude, when you put The Village People part in there, all I could think of was Waynes World. lol. Loved the update!!! There was so many parts where I thought he was gonna kiss her then nothing. You're teasing me!!! lol. more soon please? =D
    June 20th, 2010 at 06:44am
  • Secrets Surround Me

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    HOLY F*CKIN SHIT THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! And soooooo damn adorable!!! I really really want them to get together =D Just kiss already and let the sparks fly lol. So if this is almost the end, does that mean a sequel might be next? :)
    June 20th, 2010 at 01:20am
  • punkstar102

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    Update soon! I'm so addicted to reading this story and I can't wait to read more!
    June 20th, 2010 at 12:59am