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  • Lost Cause

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    I remember this story!!!! You've made a few new updates since I last read it, but I remember it!!!

    I can't wait to read more because this story is awesome!
    April 13th, 2009 at 10:38pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I can't believe Brian threw at her chest!!
    I really hope that she leaves him soon.
    Love the update.
    April 4th, 2009 at 11:59pm
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    Dude, no.
    Fuck Brian, don't you know that hitting a girl in the chest at the right angle, and hard enough hurts like a bitch, it's the equivilant to a kick in the balls, boy.
    God, he's such a dick.
    <666
    March 30th, 2009 at 11:09pm
  • RX Queen

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    Oh my, at her chest? Bastard.
    I'm glad your back and running dear!
    March 26th, 2009 at 11:51pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    love the update.
    March 15th, 2009 at 10:42pm
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    hmmm
    well that was interesting to say the least.
    little action eh.
    <666
    March 13th, 2009 at 02:19am
  • RX Queen

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    WHAAA?! :crazy:
    First I started worrying about what the title could mean and now this! Brian's gonna kill her...

    This chapter was well worth waiting for.
    More, more!
    March 12th, 2009 at 05:37am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    Bahahahaha
    I'm coughing from laughing at Jimmy.
    it's cute, but it's also fucking hilarious.
    "You are the syrup to my pancakes"
    was funny, not to mention everything else.
    <666
    March 7th, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • RX Queen

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    Oh my god, I love the update! :crazy:
    Jimmy is so creepy, in the most wonderful way <3
    The pancakes line made me lol.

    And your character has the same name as me. Fuckin' sweetness XD

    More soon, I love this <3
    March 7th, 2009 at 06:46am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    Oh yeah.
    Dr. Feelgood.
    I fucking love Tommy Lee.
    he's amazing
    updation soon?
    <666
    February 28th, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • RX Queen

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    Yay, update!
    Keep it up :]
    February 28th, 2009 at 05:05am
  • tabs tholomew plague

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    Thank you so MUCH for reading my stories guys!!=D...I'm gonna update Tom.
    Please continue to read...it gets better!
    February 26th, 2009 at 07:42am
  • RX Queen

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    Ooo, that dickhead Brian. I agree with everyone else, the concept is very different than anything I've read. I like it :]
    Update soon!
    February 26th, 2009 at 06:28am
  • Just_Nicole

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    I love story, update soon? xx
    February 25th, 2009 at 10:41pm
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    Gawd Brian, way to be a cuntface.
    Johnny Christ....
    He was standing making sure Tabitha was tattooing her patient properly. She's a great tattooist but sometimes she comes in for work higher than a cloud.
    ahahaha.
    funny, higher than a kite..........
    I loved that.
    <666
    February 25th, 2009 at 02:00am
  • MrsHemmo.

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    Very good!! :]
    Loved it.
    I wish Brian wasn't such a bitch face. :/
    Haha. I'm surprised Amanda wasn't going out with Matt.

    Keep going, girl!!!
    This is awesome!!!!!
    February 24th, 2009 at 06:16am
  • PrincessShortie75

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    It is SO DIFFERENT! I NEVER READ ONE WITH BRIAN LIKE THAT! I'VE ALWAYS READ HIM AS A HERO!! But ...(who no more caps...) but I will read anyways. Loved it Chica!
    February 23rd, 2009 at 09:03pm
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    Yes, I do like it.
    It's different and Brian's a fucking cunt face.
    I love Kat, and he should be nice.
    If he knows how anyway.

    Put a cock in it made me laugh :mrgreen:
    Most definately continue Clap
    <666
    February 22nd, 2009 at 02:22am
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