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  • Leonore Paisley

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    This is amazing.
    I love it.
    I love your style. It's way better than the stuff I write.
    =] And it's really original. <3
    December 11th, 2007 at 08:03am
  • dreamboat.

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    IT
    WAS
    HER
    MOM
    :D
    Smiley
    August 21st, 2007 at 12:10pm
  • Bella-

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    Whoa.
    This is so sad....BUT I LOVE IT!!!

    More when you can please :D
    August 21st, 2007 at 12:03pm
  • id0ntCareiFy0Udont

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    this is AMAZING... it's sad- but i wanna keep reading anyway- ahhhh.. keep writing!
    August 20th, 2007 at 11:04pm
  • Jinx_Luckystar

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    amazing as usual
    wow that was really sad
    will anything good happen soon?
    August 20th, 2007 at 06:43pm
  • The Brightside

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    Chapter 5.
    August 20th, 2007 at 05:38pm
  • dreamboat.

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    ANNELIESE I DEMAND YOU GIVE ME MORE
    *giggles*
    :tehe:

    sexual Naughty
    Smiley
    August 20th, 2007 at 03:06am
  • Bella-

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    Whoa....

    I like..NEED MORE!!

    This story is...Amazing.
    Your a very descripitive/amazing writer.

    More when you can please :)
    August 17th, 2007 at 09:46am
  • lisamargaret

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    That was awesome !
    Your descriptions and imagery are amazing.
    You are an amazing writer.
    I loved this chapter.
    And I love this story. Write more soon.
    August 16th, 2007 at 01:38am
  • id0ntCareiFy0Udont

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    awww.... it's soo sad :cry:. but i must say it's pretty damn good... [and the layout worked fine for me]
    August 15th, 2007 at 09:25pm
  • Jinx_Luckystar

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    wow! she has to go get him/her!!!
    grrr
    August 15th, 2007 at 08:53pm
  • The Brightside

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    Chapter 4.
    August 15th, 2007 at 07:20pm
  • The Way

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    Your description and narration was very appropriate to the story; not over the top and not lacking at all. There's an aura of mystery and drama that surrounds Daniel's death, and the reader can sympathize with Monique's muddled feelings as she thinks of her life now. I would prefer it with more emotion, more reality and grief, but other than that, good job. :D
    August 13th, 2007 at 06:12pm
  • dreamboat.

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    i
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    moreeeeee
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    July 10th, 2007 at 02:50am
  • id0ntCareiFy0Udont

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    nice. sad, but good.

    Smiley
    July 9th, 2007 at 10:24pm
  • Jinx_Luckystar

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    amazing!
    wow this is so heartbreakingly sad
    poor poor monique
    July 9th, 2007 at 05:48pm
  • waitingforsomething

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    Nice, I like it so far. So... getting through emotional issues AND a "who done it", I like it.
    July 9th, 2007 at 01:57pm
  • hey jealousy.

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    oh man, i really want to know what happened to this guy and why.
    I can't wait for the drama of the investigation

    The song was a nice touch as well :)
    July 9th, 2007 at 12:06pm
  • lisamargaret

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    I love this story. Very well written. Alot better than most fan-fics out there.

    I hope you write more soon.

    This story is awesome.
    July 9th, 2007 at 11:06am
  • dreamboat.

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    whoa
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    July 4th, 2007 at 03:24am
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