Falling in front of you - Comments

I just read this entire story over the course of five hours. This proves I have no life. But still. x3 I can't believe Tristan though. I just can't believe it. Lauren is a sweetheart, though. Though I really wish she'd just tell Rachel what was going on. I feel like I'm hooked on a sappy romance daytime television show. xD But it's just so great. Please update soon? I noticed this story is in a bit of a haitus. I demand this not be so. :|

Hiya I have got to say you are a wonderdful writer and I'm pretty ispired by you :) I have read this twice now because I just can't get enough of it but you will have to complete it sometime because I'm dying to know what happens but I'm not sure if I have commented on it before but hey ho but just update soonishhh I say well you know couple of months something like that :) xxx

Aww, I love this :]
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I would like for you to know that I began reading this story last night, and I got alllll the way to chapter 35 (then I had to stop) and I thought about it all freakin' day long, and I just finished, and I am absolutely in love.
Please, please continue.
Lauren is just precious.
This story is amazing.
I love your style.

I can't believe that this is finally updated!! This has to be one of the best femslash stories out here, and I kinda love the plot and the characters. I also had to be refreshed, on my memory too.. but let me say I loved it :) and have fun at uni!

I LOVE IT!!!!! Its soooooo amazing:D

<3Amanda

Wow!
So, I had to read the previous chapter to refresh my memory. More like skimmed it. I was going into the update pumped! I was pleased to see Jason show up, spreading his 'jason-ness'. Then, Lauren showed up. She was chatting with Rachel's dad about cars, which was cool and quirky. To me, it was fitting for her character. I'm happy that at the end, Rachel felt in place with Lauren. But, are troubles brewing?

I'll be patiently waiting for the next one. I hope you enjoy uni! <3

HURRY UPPPPPP and update, I really really enjoy this story.
I wish you'd turn it into a full blown book, I'd buy it :).

it was wonderful as to be expected

I really really like this. you write like Sarra Manning :}

I knew they lived on the same street, but damn, I was not expecting that. But, of course they knew each other. Lauren worked at the video store. Since they were kids? I'm thinking we're going to get some more knowledge of Tristan's history as well as Lauren's.

By the way, the exes paragraph was fantastic!
=D

Love the update! Can't wait for the next one :D

"‘my ex was an asshole’ ‘my ex is a better kisser than you’"
Lol, that's great.
Imma go read that one-shot now.

And you wouldn't get hate mail because of that... I think.

gawd. I wish I could give all youuuu commenters a huge homo group hug. It seems like y'all are falling in love with Lauren, heh. I'm glad you're all liking the story so far. Really really glad. =] I promise I won't kill Lauren off in this story, I'd like to avoid pitchforks and hate mail.

Tristan is still on Rachel's mind. Her heart is broken and they way she feels, fault lines. A huge part of me wants Lauren to have that power to pull her heart back together. But, Tristan is there. She was the first to come along and crush Rachel's heart. That doesn't exactly go away, so, the small part of me knows Lauren is only an ocean feeling the void. Tristan will come back into the picture and drain the water out bit by bit, weakening Rachel, and her feelings. The girl will be Rachel's plague.

At least, that's what comes to my mind. It could be a forgive and forget, moving on dealio. *shrugs*

OhmyGod, I wish I was Rachel, Lauren is such a beautiful romantic.
I absolutely love the way you write this, every chapter, it's incredible.
The paragraph with the lamps and the firehazard made me giggle.
I'm super glad that Rachel's getting over Tristan, too. Lauren's so much better!
You better not do something to her. >.>
And the last paragraph was pure perfection, it was just absolutely beautiful. I loved every word, and I think the first sentence is my new favourite quote, because it's just gorgeous. (:

fucking hell even i think IM falling for lauren! Aha, love it :D Update soon!

i fucking love this :| Seriously dude - its amazing :D:D Update soon ^^

i really love this story!

I agree with Rachel. I hope Lauren wants to get lucky, too.
Am I just a pervert? Not just, no. Haha.
I wonder if Rachel will get what she wants...