As i let my eyes float over a few comments, looks like you've hit the nail on the head. yes you've banged it - well, lauren, so to speak :P. i mean, she's a hit. if only a person who is just as amazing, with smirking qualities existed?? i'm sure she'd pick the zoo too. especially the lions den. Raw*
Beginnings are fun, but at the same time rachel is saying goodbye to a part of her life. something that she let take control - and ir ran away with her heart. It makes me wonder how much she'll give of herself to this new 'attraction of her affection.'
"The pen didn’t work, so I scribbled some circles first lightly, the shiver I felt from her was, I’ll be honest, quite delicious." Don't think i missed those moments of lauren's anxiety. she may appear as the over confident on the outside, but i'm sensing a just as nervous girly girl under that tough exterior...
i can't believe chapter 30 is soon coming! we must celebrate. and yes, i mean their should be a certain reader warning. pokes*
Glad to see your are alive - here i was concerned you had fallen off a cliff, had a horrific skateboarding accident, or got lured into a dark alley way with candy. just the normal conclusion my mind jumped too... BUT; we have rachel, and lauren - and lift-off. I love how you can take an idea, a relationship, and turn it into so much more. I feel for Rach, i really do she's been broken in a syllable, yet rejuvenated (and possibly saved from obesity) by a stream of only 10 digits. So, this lauren chick. firstly... she's rather awesome. bold, different, intuitive. sounds like someone i'd like to know...
I had to google 'kerrang' - but i did, and like someone who gets the joke 5 minutes after someone said it i laugh and wonder if i get points for trying?
I feel kind of sad that I read this so late. It was like expecting to finish a book but it's not done. Maybe I came early. Though I don't feel like waiting for the updates.
This story is so... touching. I really feel her confusion, her pain and her absent-mindedness. Tristan reminds me me alot of myself... though I've never been able to come out to anyone.
Please don't stop writting this story. Don't even consider it.
Beginnings are fun, but at the same time rachel is saying goodbye to a part of her life. something that she let take control - and ir ran away with her heart. It makes me wonder how much she'll give of herself to this new 'attraction of her affection.'
"The pen didn’t work, so I scribbled some circles first lightly, the shiver I felt from her was, I’ll be honest, quite delicious."
Don't think i missed those moments of lauren's anxiety. she may appear as the over confident on the outside, but i'm sensing a just as nervous girly girl under that tough exterior...
i can't believe chapter 30 is soon coming! we must celebrate. and yes, i mean their should be a certain reader warning. pokes*