Falling in front of you - Comments

omg i love your story i cant wait for your next update.
i hope that you are able to stay focused in school though.
good luck with everything.

(o.o) (O.<) (o.o) (O.<) you need to update i'm going through withdrawal (o.o) (O.<) see I twitch.

I really liked the awkward morning Rachel had encountered. And, I love all the rambling in her mind. I suppose that is in every chapter, but I still enjoy it.

you're simply amazing.

It can be easy to be consumed in our own lives, not thinking to see anything but our own problems, or experiences. I'm glad that rachel is seeing things from jasons point of view as he's got a long road ahead. you're right, love isn't as black and white as the word implies. can you love a piece of someone?

i really do hope rachels second date goes just as well, and donald duck gets a special mention. ;)

xox
p.s lauren 'rambling' over breakfast choises. perfect. heh.

Ahh, I love this story so much, it's the best femmeslash on this entire site.
The last paragraph was beautiful, talking about how there's just one word for love. It's something no one really thinks about, but it's so true.
And also where Rachel was thinking about Jason and her knowing each other 10 years from then. I've been thinking abou that a lot with my own friends, and I could relate that entire passage.
Oh, and I'm really starting to fall in love with Lauren.

i love this story and i look forward to more :D:D update soon please ^^

I love it! it is so so so so awwsome! update soon PLZ!!!

OK SO I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!!!! update!!!

i love this story alot i hope that you update soon. :D plzzzzzzzzz lol

I'm now kicking myself- I wish I read through this story a hell of a lot slower.
It's just so effing good!
So that said, please update soon. =)

Lauren is such a great character. She seems like a really cool person. It's sad that I have to tell myself that she's nor the story is real.

oh, i really shouldn't be reading this at work. no, really.

Trouble, eh? Nicknames are fun to throw around, and it's almost possesive, in a non stalker type way. uh-huh.
I like to think you did your research for the begginning of this chapter - you write rachel's intoxicated state rather well... An those little circles were driving ME crazy...I wonder what else rachel can't say no to.... wink-e-ty-wink.

I love the soft hint of rebelion that lauren has - the roadsign, the lying to rachels' parents - it's subtle and small, but perhaps the hint to those skeletons that we know nothing about yet.

So Rachel is keeping a "Lauren bank" huh? what a rediciulously adorable move there. who knows, perhaps Lauren keeps a bank too - you could even throw in a chapter from her POV - if you wanted to mix it up,

from your favourite rambly-rambler. xo

i facking LOVE this story dude :):):) Update soon ^^

No no no. PlayStation 3's are better. Well... in my opinion. Sure the X-box 360 cost less and I think it has more games but it doesn't have certain things like the PS3 does(hehe, blue ray).
~ Mini rant that wasn't really needed.
Though the update fulfilled my reading needs.

No no no. PlayStation 3's are better. Well... in my opinion. Sure the X-box 360 cost less and I think it has more games but it doesn't have certain things like the PS3 does(hehe, blue ray).
~ Mini rant that wasn't really needed.
Though the update fulfilled my reading needs.

No no no. PlayStation 3's are better. Well... in my opinion. Sure the X-box 360 cost less and I think it has more games but it doesn't have certain things like the PS3 does(hehe, blue ray).
~ Mini rant that wasn't really needed.
Though the update fulfilled my reading needs.

I don't know how anybody could not like this story unless they were the most homophobic person on the planet.
Or my mother.
Anyway, I freakin' love it.

OMG, IM IN LOVE, I THINK.
This is probably the first femmeslash chaptered fic i've read and finished, because it's just that damn amazing.
I'm in love with Lauren I think she'd be great for Rachel
Keep on writing pleeasse? : >

I love lauren! LIKE LOADS :) Update soon pleeeeeeeeeease ^^

I'm not going to ramble. or babble. or rabble (i'll let you figure that one out for yourself).

I'm just going to congradulate you on chapter 31, and my favourite (I know, and there isn't even any sexy time, right?!). You're an author that leaves us hungry for more, and paints a masterpiece with words that we can all relate to. I'm running out of different ways to convey how much you rock - so i guess all i can say is.... 1 million points.
untill next time, romeo.