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  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    cute ending love!
    August 21st, 2009 at 05:22am
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    Wow I read the whole story so far all today and let me tell you, I love it so far. It is so amazing and full of so many twists, you are very creative!! This isn't like any other fanfic I have read and I love how loving gerard is toward Gracie. It's so sweet. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    July 15th, 2009 at 10:38am
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    woah
    July 15th, 2009 at 09:31am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    cute
    July 15th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    i dont believe him for a second
    July 14th, 2009 at 10:26pm
  • ILOVEBILLK4EVER

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    i can't wait for the next chapter
    update soon?
    July 14th, 2009 at 06:19pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    did he cheat?
    July 14th, 2009 at 06:58am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    what has the jack ass done now
    seriously she just cant catch a break
    i love this story
    and i cant wait for the next update...
    which i hope is soon
    July 14th, 2009 at 04:57am
  • RainBow BalLooN

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    i'm working alot of stuff right now but something will be up soon thanky ou all for commenting!
    July 11th, 2009 at 08:53pm
  • ILOVEBILLK4EVER

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    i love it...will you update soon?
    July 11th, 2009 at 08:41pm
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    yay love it :D
    July 6th, 2009 at 05:53pm
  • Sweeney Way

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I just read the whole thing in one sittng and i cant wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Soon please!?
    June 22nd, 2009 at 10:20am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I kinda like it, but it was getting a bit random near the 24th chappy.
    June 12th, 2009 at 06:40am
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    Woah I didn't expect that one. But good chapter. I loved it....Update soon please
    June 11th, 2009 at 08:57am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    yay she faced her fears
    June 11th, 2009 at 01:42am
  • XToxic_AlibiX

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    I absolutely love the whole thing (like i have said before). Really like it. Update soon please
    June 5th, 2009 at 03:32am
  • secrets-that-die

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    scary
    June 3rd, 2009 at 12:14am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    dude
    danny's back
    really
    wow
    i would have flipped the fuck out
    i loved
    cant wait to see what happens next
    June 2nd, 2009 at 08:12pm
  • chelz2012

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    woooow I lovers this story its amazing love Gee and Craig yup
    UPDATE SOON
    i stayed up till 12;44 am reading this and i have school tommrow its that good
    Night
    Chelsea
    June 2nd, 2009 at 06:45am
  • Mallory Mallibu

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    Very original and unique story. You have a hand for writing.
    Parden my blunt-ness though, I always have the need to point out things I dont like. If im offending you im sorry.

    But I think with the problems i.e. gracies mom dying; the burglar; the crying episodes, I think you should make them a little more troublesome. I mean, without them the story would be boring but they dont really have a purpose in the story line. Try and work them in a little? Please. :)

    And this one is just my poor, frugile, upbringing showing through, but I think it's weird how you make Gerard and Lyn-z rich. I know that theyre both somewhat famous musicians, Gerard more so, but I dont think that theyre rich enough to give their sixteen year old a limitless credit card and have like a seven bedroom house?

    But you know, very nice, I don't have the imagination to create this kind of original work. Good for you.

    Just, take what I said into mind please. Clap
    May 12th, 2009 at 03:14am
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