The Ring Was the Clue - Comments

hehe again....completely amazing (i want ur writing abilities)

yay another great chapter and u r very welcome

this girl just cant catch a break
i really like this story
update soon

XxThe_ForgottenxX:

wow tht was a really heartfelt chapter and i am soo sorry about ur grandma

thank you.

wow tht was a really heartfelt chapter and i am soo sorry about ur grandma

This is a great beining to a wonderful story. I have read stories like this and this one is by far one of the best I have read.

I hate to be the person to tell you this but I think that you might have to go back and re-read some of your chapters there are some spelling mistakes and grammer errors along with some words that really shouldn't be there...it could just be that I read it wrong and if so then I am sorry but I'm pretty sure there are a couple of spelling mistakes...I know we can't get them all but it helps when the readers let you know...to make the story better...or something like that.

Anyway I really hope to read more of this story. I hope that it has a happy ending therfor I am subscribing just to find out. I hope you up date soon. Thank you for sharing the story thus far.

:) (I hope that I didn't offend you in anyway I was trying to be constructive with this comment and if I did offend you I am deeply sorry. Keep writing though don't let me get in you way, for if I did I would feel horrible, know that I may have stopped a great writer from continuing an awsome story) :)

ur leaving me hang here again u kno thts not very nice.....plz update really really soon

aww come on how can u leave such a good story to just hang on like tht

this is REALLYYYYY good
i love itt!