The Ring Was the Clue - Comments

cute ending love!

Wow I read the whole story so far all today and let me tell you, I love it so far. It is so amazing and full of so many twists, you are very creative!! This isn't like any other fanfic I have read and I love how loving gerard is toward Gracie. It's so sweet. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

woah

cute

i dont believe him for a second

i can't wait for the next chapter
update soon?

did he cheat?

what has the jack ass done now
seriously she just cant catch a break
i love this story
and i cant wait for the next update...
which i hope is soon

i'm working alot of stuff right now but something will be up soon thanky ou all for commenting!

i love it...will you update soon?

yay love it :D

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just read the whole thing in one sittng and i cant wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Soon please!?

I kinda like it, but it was getting a bit random near the 24th chappy.

Woah I didn't expect that one. But good chapter. I loved it....Update soon please

yay she faced her fears

I absolutely love the whole thing (like i have said before). Really like it. Update soon please

scary

dude
danny's back
really
wow
i would have flipped the fuck out
i loved
cant wait to see what happens next

woooow I lovers this story its amazing love Gee and Craig yup
UPDATE SOON
i stayed up till 12;44 am reading this and i have school tommrow its that good
Night
Chelsea

Very original and unique story. You have a hand for writing.
Parden my blunt-ness though, I always have the need to point out things I dont like. If im offending you im sorry.

But I think with the problems i.e. gracies mom dying; the burglar; the crying episodes, I think you should make them a little more troublesome. I mean, without them the story would be boring but they dont really have a purpose in the story line. Try and work them in a little? Please. :)

And this one is just my poor, frugile, upbringing showing through, but I think it's weird how you make Gerard and Lyn-z rich. I know that theyre both somewhat famous musicians, Gerard more so, but I dont think that theyre rich enough to give their sixteen year old a limitless credit card and have like a seven bedroom house?

But you know, very nice, I don't have the imagination to create this kind of original work. Good for you.

Just, take what I said into mind please.