Chapter 1: Arrival The dad is so awesome. He's nice. I wish I had a dad like that. And also I like how they mess and joke with each other. That's a nice family.
Hahaha "Bushfire Boys" XD Waay to go embarass me in front of the entire Mibbian race. Argh, stupid geo hwk, got bushfires on da brain! Anyways, nice story, but you might wanna fix the part with a little gender-confusion I told ya about in chapter one =P Anyway byebye for now~ <3 ~LEXI~