The Tale of The Queen of Hearts - Comments

this was perfection your writing is so poetic and beautiful. I love the way you decribe feelings and settings. The one thing you are really strong at is the mood, its hard to find people on this website that get that part down. Each setting has a mood that you set with your words its not just telling what is going on its getting the feel down. You have all of that down to perfection! you should keep writing on this one.

"I nearly ruined it, by saying ‘I love you’ and nearly meaning it"

that's how i feel right now. thanks for summing it all up neatly :)

I liked this, good relationship defining points in this.
And it's a damn sight better than my short story lol ;)

Whoa!

*speechless*

I loved it~ absolutely! =D

It was really new and inspiring <3 Please post more! =D