You keep me from the arms of death... - Comments

Than you guys so much for your support, I hope you countinue to read the sequel and enjoy it. I now I feel like I'm going downhill with my writing, but hey school is stessfull ;)
Anyways, you've all been amazing so thank you x

Amazingly good story! :)
I absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Moving on to the sequel now :D

i love it! its so so so good. i cant wait to read the sequel.

awww beautiful ending
im stoked for sequel
soryr this isnt commented when i usually do.
im actually grounded for the computer. have been for some time now.
right now im sneaking on.
lovedddd ittt thoughhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awwwww!! what a happy ending!! why isn't life that way -.- ahh well... you did great!

AWESOME!
love it!
i just finished chapta...20 somethin, anyway it was called house arrest.

I LOVE IT! its amazing. its so sad that hope and saphire aren't friends anymore, but hope deserved what she got. write more soon.

ok ive forgotten everything i wanted to say in this chapter. delete!!??
did it give u a reason??? like one girls had like a x in it or something and it got deleted. for what reason, seriously????? it cannot be language or sexual reasons in the sotry...if so mine needs deleted to!!! wdf!! this better not get deleted!!!! u need to copy ur writing then re-post it if it does delete. but very good, very good chapter. aww but u need to mention finn and ollie too!!!!!!!!!
update, love!!!!!!!

fo sho girl!!!
freakin sweetttt!!!
well i like just got back form vacation!!!
like had to read ur update!!!!!!
and of course ill like read your sequel!!!!!
whewt whewtt!!!!!
i lubbbbb this story and its people!!! good for a first one!!!!!!
gahhhh i love itt!!!
sorry this won't be as logn as my usual comments...i have 20 more stories to read!! but pleasee update!!!!!

i love it! it's so good. one of my favorites. you're an amazing writer, and i cant wait to read more.

Loved that filler
It was cute and the football scene at the end (Her suggesting it I mean)was great
more soon

yummmmmm
yummy chapter, love!!!!
rofl
its all working out good!!!!!
awww reed is so cute with Fire!!!!
I like that Lori is good...not a whore any more!!
i thought is was so sweet how she suggested football. rofl
duh..how can i not comment every one of ur chapters...its like a sin aint it?
rofl
u such a good frann!!!!!
i hope my shout outs r helping...if not i feel bad!!!
ty for mine!!
plus....
THNAK YOU SO FREAKIN MUCH!! WHEWWW YEHA ALL U READERS OUT THERE...OLLIE IS MINE!!!!!!!! rofl
....im a happily obsessed still!!!
rofl
still whenever u decide to end it...think of a sequel!!!
i loved the parts with the horse and dog, and bee and shark
ROFL
nice work there
one thing though that idont like
WHY TEH FUCK DO U AHVE ONLY 3 STARS!!!!
wds
thats messed up!!!!
oh loved how it was long....update again!!!!!!!
u bitches better comment her, and subscribe..dont make em pull out the hobo weapon!!!!!
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love ya,
Chrissyy!!!!!

I haven't commented in forever
I missed a lot of e-mails
This thing was amazing though
I loved it
and I'm happy since I'm a Reed fan

the story was really good. it had a lot of interesting twists, and i think you did amazing.

No one ever listens to me...Ollie. Ollie. Ollie.
MTOL

No one ever listens to me...Ollie. Ollie. Ollie.
MTOL

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YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHEWT WHEWT!!!!
OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG....TY!!
YEAH MY CHARACTER GONNA BE WITH AWESOME OLLIE!!!!
im like so excited now. i was having a terrible morning, but read that...so like whewwtttttttt!!!!!!!
yay yay
also i think a sequel could be good still. let the characters continue on!!??? idk ask everybody in ur next author note, i see people do that alll the time!!
love it love it
hey other people....like u better comment....or ill kick ur damn ass in a cigarette box and give u to a hobo who will try to smoke u but eat u. so then to get shitted out on the side of the road......where do hobos go to the bathroom? i just thought of that. neways i promise, thats a threat people!!!!

loved itt!!!!
absolutley loved it
send that bitch becca to hell
im fine with reed and fire....i understand now!!
good thing finn and lori alright
reed and fire, finn and lori, ollie and crissy(cee)?
hmmm yes i want this story to continue...
u could like write one mroe chapter...then make a sequel
idk u could make fire and crissy preggo
so both there kids would be like best friends....its a good idea but ud have to have some drama
hmmmm.......
robbed? someone close killed? or fire finds her real dad, unless he died...idr sorry.
they travel somewhere else!!
idk aghh
why am i planning out UR story...sorry that was rude of me....
my b
but update, do w.e u wish!! becuase imma always read it!!!!!

Cor, Becca is needy!

ok ive re-read...
now that uve explained what happened
its a lot more clear.

u said in ur authors note...for ollie fans not to get mad...u said nothing about Ollie and Finn fans so

-gets mad-
wds shoulda been Finn or Ollie. Why Reed.

Whats the plot to this story. not being rude, because i love this. but its all drama, whos with who, who likes who. whats...the plot?