I Don't Like His Skinny Jeans - Comments

I get it now!
I think due to my writting in 1st person all the time I forgot what 3rd person is.
But I suggest when you are changnig a point of view that you say that.
Also, I admire the way you write (:
You have earned yourself a subscriber.

I really like this but I read the first five chapters and I'm lost.
It seems like you always change persons, like you go from 1st person to 3rd it seems.
I will sunscribe and reread it later so good job minus being lost :D

Omg, finally got to comment this. And you know what?! I love it!
NO MORE JASON, PLEASE.
We want more Patrick. Moremoremore. I love the way you write :)

yay! you updated! and the plot thickens... I like! heehheee I am looking forward to your next chapter and hope you update soon

Bittersweet update

Who be Jasper?

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh the it'll kill me!!!!!!! to no end until you update! Such a good story

YOU MADE Y LIFE!!!! I love this story!!! I hope you update soon. It is very good and a strong plot so far. I can't wait to see where you go with it!

Woah he came! Too bad he missed the important part. Or did he?
I almost got some shoes that sound like the ones she's wearing. But I didn't have anything to wear them with.

He turned up?
Oh, wow.

I like this.
Like a whole lot.
Waiting for an update :)

I predict this story becoming my latest obsession. Keep it coming! x

I'm upset that I won't see this updated for a while but I understand where you're coming from.
Great update, as always :)

I like this story. :) I love how Willy and Patrick meet. NICE!

I love thiss.

Great update
I love how you showed both of their thoughts :cute:

Haha lovely update. I must confess I have hugged my journal before and done the **** thing to it. It's just not the same in writing.

Great update
You may have Partick and Andy back
*throws them to you*
and Andy lies just so you know, he so said yes when Itold asked him if he wanted to sleep with me :file:

You must update or...or...I'll kidnap Patrick and Andy!
Yes...I shall kidnap them both!

oh..my..gosh...i love this story!! you're an amazing writer.