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  • sleepingonthewaves

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    I get it now!
    I think due to my writting in 1st person all the time I forgot what 3rd person is.
    But I suggest when you are changnig a point of view that you say that.
    Also, I admire the way you write (:
    You have earned yourself a subscriber.
    February 25th, 2011 at 03:00am
  • sleepingonthewaves

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    I really like this but I read the first five chapters and I'm lost.
    It seems like you always change persons, like you go from 1st person to 3rd it seems.
    I will sunscribe and reread it later so good job minus being lost :D
    February 25th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • nostradamus.

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    Omg, finally got to comment this. And you know what?! I love it!
    NO MORE JASON, PLEASE.
    We want more Patrick. Moremoremore. I love the way you write :)
    July 7th, 2010 at 05:25pm
  • Nightshifter

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    yay! you updated! and the plot thickens... I like! heehheee I am looking forward to your next chapter and hope you update soon
    February 16th, 2010 at 07:48am
  • The Color Abi

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    Bittersweet update
    February 13th, 2010 at 12:06pm
  • The Color Abi

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    Who be Jasper?
    January 26th, 2010 at 04:21pm
  • Nightshifter

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    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh the it'll kill me!!!!!!! to no end until you update! Such a good story
    January 26th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • Nightshifter

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    YOU MADE Y LIFE!!!! I love this story!!! I hope you update soon. It is very good and a strong plot so far. I can't wait to see where you go with it!
    January 22nd, 2010 at 11:25pm
  • Pokey-mans

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    Woah he came! Too bad he missed the important part. Or did he?
    I almost got some shoes that sound like the ones she's wearing. But I didn't have anything to wear them with.
    January 13th, 2010 at 02:01am
  • The Color Abi

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    He turned up?
    Oh, wow.
    January 12th, 2010 at 07:25pm
  • StrongerWithWords

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    I like this.
    Like a whole lot.
    Waiting for an update :)
    January 11th, 2010 at 12:23am
  • saxophonesandmcr

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    I predict this story becoming my latest obsession. Keep it coming! x
    December 27th, 2009 at 08:09pm
  • The Color Abi

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    I'm upset that I won't see this updated for a while but I understand where you're coming from.
    Great update, as always :)
    November 11th, 2009 at 09:17pm
  • Saphira.Bubba

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    I like this story. :) I love how Willy and Patrick meet. NICE!
    October 23rd, 2009 at 07:47pm
  • Battery After.

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    I love thiss.
    October 1st, 2009 at 03:21am
  • The Color Abi

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    Great update
    I love how you showed both of their thoughts :cute:
    September 29th, 2009 at 10:18pm
  • Pokey-mans

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    Haha lovely update. I must confess I have hugged my journal before and done the **** thing to it. It's just not the same in writing.
    September 22nd, 2009 at 10:09pm
  • The Color Abi

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    Great update
    You may have Partick and Andy back
    *throws them to you*
    and Andy lies just so you know, he so said yes when Itold asked him if he wanted to sleep with me :file:
    September 20th, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • The Color Abi

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    You must update or...or...I'll kidnap Patrick and Andy!
    Yes...I shall kidnap them both!
    June 20th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • Battery After.

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    oh..my..gosh...i love this story!! you're an amazing writer.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 03:09am
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