I'm excited! Weird enough, I was thinking about this story about two weeks ago, and today I check my subscriptions and see that it's been updated. Rewritten, but still good! Better, even. :)
OMG You're alive?! Yay! I'm so excited for you to rewrite this story, maybe this time you'll make it to the end? you were so closelast time! I'll be anticipating you're updates ^.^
So I stumbled upon this story, and just finished reading it in one sitting, because I couldn't stop on account of how good it is. And then I went to your profile and saw that it hasn't been updated in almost a year, and now I think I know what a broken heart feels like.
I love it.. i love it i love it i love it... :) and Nolan!! he's back!! and i love him!! and i wish he were real so that i could be friends with him.. :) my theory is that he's not dead, but he's in a coma.. that's what i think. but anyways.... ugh!! why a cliffhanger!! i just read all 16 chapters tonight and i was like, omg! nolan's back, what next!! and then i looked at the bottom of the page, and to my dismay, there was no chapter 18. :( but i am totally looking forward to it!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) keep up the good work, cuz it's AWESOME!
Gosh, I am so sorry it took me so long to comment! I feel really bad, but better later then never, right? I loved the chapter by the way, the 'kissing scene'? No way in any shape or form did it "suck". I liked it, I thought it was cute, and perfect for Boa and Holden. I wouldn't have had it any other way.
. . .Wow... here i was, all sad becasue Nolan was gone, and then I get this amazing chapter, and then... he's back...? whoa...NICE! lovely, and the kissing scene wasn't bad/terrible. wonderful writing, again.
I'm pretty sure that updating during NaNoWriMo makes you a super hero. No lie. But yay I'm so glad Nolan's back! I love him, seriously. And there was nothing wrong with your kissing scene, there are far worse out there, seriously. But now I have to wait forever to figure out who Nolan found, awesome. Anyway I love this story, it's always exciting when you update it.
I just noticed that I know every one in this story like greg kline and kate miles! i cant believe i missed it!! That is why i love Sophie that and the fact we are in yoda bush together. Oh and by the way your song is half done cant wait to come visit you and play it!!!!!
Aw, Nolan! Ha, I laugh a lot reading this chapter. You're amazing, and lovely, love.
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PS: I'd have such a better comment if my flippin stomach would stop making me feel like I've been in a car too long, when I'm not in a flippin car! >:| <--- That's my mad face.