Death! (And All its Friends) - Comments

awwwww
how sweet
i knew it
i really did
that he had a crush on her
he was all to eager to begin their friendship!
and no guy really goes out of there way to pick on some random girl

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“I’ve had a crush on you for, like, forever. Nolan coming here was the best thing that’s ever happened to me, because I got to meet you, and talk to you, and know how truly incredible you are and-”

:cute: How sweet!

Wow, I can honestly say this is the best story I've read in a long time (and it's summer, trust me when I say I have spare time.) It's refreshing to see such a unique story like this, keep it up for the sake of my sanity :]

You are just amazing.
May I kiss the ground you walk?

I love this chapter! so sweet :D Interesting that her name is Natalie, mine's Natalia.

SO CUTE!

i love kisses in the rain.....i love even more that holden flipped off nolan when he was rudely interupting his kiss with boa...or should i say natalie?

anyways, this was really good....i'm just wondering, is it finished?

Well I'm commenting regardless whether you update again tonight, or not.
It was an awesome chapter. Sad ending, but I can't wait for more.

Keep up the awesome work!

CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!

Oh man, I can't wait for the other part tonight. I'm freaking out!
I hope you make Holden feel like crap for what he did to Bo D:<

I'm excited for the next one! :cute:

oh my god.....please update soon!

i'm dying to know what happens, after i beat holden to a pummel for breaking boa's heart :)

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Please?

I was finally able to read the two chapters that I didn't read!
I'm really sorry it took me so long, I kept having to do things and then when I'd sit down and try to read all the stories that we're being updated I kept getting distracted. School is so annoying.

I just want to tell you that I seriously got butterflies when Holden kissed her hand.
Also, there's a part (i think in chapter ten) where you put Holden instead of Nolan.
(Something about him snapping at Holden - but you meant Nolan- )

I love Holden. I think him and Chet would get along very well, lol.
Wow, that sounded sad, haha.

New reader!
This story is so effing good!
Update soonnnnn. I need to know what happens at that party :]

Amazing story:)
keep up the good writing on this:D

okay so ive been holding out on ya.
i wasnt sure if i was going to love this story and i really didnt want tos tart reading only to have tot ell you it was simply okay. but i did cave and i am more than thrilled to say that its FANTASMIC!!!! im really glad i did decide to read this.

holden and boa are super cute!
and omg i really hope nolan starts to figure things out!
XX ive got my fingers crossed for them, all of them :]

Oh my gah. This is AMAZING, I've just started reading it and I'm already in love!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG OMG OMG AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

I'm sorry. Words fail me. But this was my favorite chapter so far, hands down. <33333

My brain is exploding from all the cool that this story eminates.

yupp
im OFFICIALLY addicted
your one of the best writers i've read
especially making it so natural
and original
your my #dos writer =D
simply amazing

I'm absolutely in love with your story right now! It's very good. :)