Noooooooo!!! My stomach fell (or jumped? I can't tell), and is now lying in a splattered mess on my pelvis. I really hope he can stop her. Can't wait for more!
My stomach would not stop churning. I swear, Kennedy is a selfish ass. And now he's losing Molly, and thats sad because they could have been really happy together had he gotten over himself. Maybe there's still hope for him. Maybe he''ll be able to stop her from going home. But if there is, what would happen come time for her and Mia to really leave? So maybe leaving now, with a valid excuse known as Kennedy Brock, is the time.
I love it. I really do. Makes me over analyze bunches.
Oddly, this story reminds me of White Horse by Taylor Swift. I'm a dork.
Kaylie, I'm on the verge of tears :'[ My heart indeed fell when reading the last part. I can't believe Molly's leaving. Just like that. I know she's super upset with him and Kennedy's been a major douche and whatnot, but she can't just leave him. GAH. Also, I want to slap Kenny for not saying he loved her sooner! I had a gut feeling he did, but he just was too scared to admit to himself. Another big huge GAH! I was like "Aww, Kenny. Why now?" You wrote this so beautifully, it makes me jelly. From beginning to end I was pulled into your character's world. You're one amazing write, my friend ;] Looking forward to reading more. I'll even bribe with an update for Summer if I have to. hehe (: <33
Okay I was literally just thinking that I wish you would update, and omfg PSYCHIC! You updated. Firstly, I think Kennedy is an asshole for having sex with her when he wasn't drunk, but I still wish she'd give him a chance. And now she's leeeeeaaaaving! I hope he goes after her. Fixes it or something. Does whatever he can. I hate not-happy endings. They never feel complete. Amazing chapter though. I really felt for both of them.
Oh, and ps, I think J-dog and G-rizzle should find out about this and a) realize that K-man loves Molly and pity him a bit...(but not enough to interfere with b...) b) do some damage to K-man. Because that's not cool, and if G-rizz got all mad about K-man making a move, I'd hate to see what Kennedy looked like after he finds out he took Molly's virginity. Actually that's a lie, I'd love to see what Kennedy looks like ANYTIME, but y'know what I mean.
mia needs to talk sense into her pronto before she "leaves". if she really does leave... i'll be heartbroken enough for me, kennedy and molly combined.
SHIT. Kaylie, what are you doing to me? I'm really sad that things went this way. Even though I knew they would, and half the time I suggested they did. But I'm sad anyway. And I know I like...raved on and on about the stupidity of Kennedy in my last comment, but now I feel bad for him. Not bad enough to forgive him for being a dick and taking her virginity and all that, but still bad enough to be sad for him. Especially with his whole deal of trying to say "I love you" to her, and she cuts him off. That's rough. And I agree with Molly. Why now??!?!?! Why couldn't he have told her all of that before he fucked everything up? Things could have been differently, maybe. (Although I doubt you'd let things go that easy, even then). I think I pity him, if nothing else. Just because he was stupid and messed things up, only to realize that he's in love with her (or realize he's not too proud to admit it), and that makes me pity him for all he's messed up. I think Molly will spend more time away from him and realize how not 'happy' she'll be without him. Because maybe her head thinks she'll be better and maybe her prides says so too, but I think she loves him and she's just scared because it's all so new and she's just too afraid of what he means to her. And, because of that, I think you should make her love him too, and admit it, and tell him that. I'm sorry this comment sucks. I'm sick and deranged and bahh lame. Update this again. I'll bribe you with some update of your choice, again. (Let's face it, we both know that'll work).
“Yeah, it is, but they’re guys, so that’s how they operate.”
What Mia said was so, SO true.
What’s wrong with you?” she asked suspiciously. “You’re not doing drugs, are you?”
That just made me laugh SO HARD! haha, :)
I'm really digging this story :) I don't know excactly what it is about your story, but it seems so real. I can envision each setting and chapter really well. I'm sorry but I gotta say I was disappointed in Molly in the 17th chapter. Aargh, she dumped him because she didn't want to do it with him and she did it anyway! Granted, she WAS drunk and wasn't thinking rationally. Though the "He wasn't drunk" as the last line really got my heart pumping. I subscribed and can't wait for the next chapter.
How did I not read this story sooner? I've never read a Kennedy fic. Shot, I'm not even a fan of The Maine. But this is just so.... there isn't a word to explain it. There aren't many writers that can truly intrigue me enough to read a story about a band/boy I'm not a fan of. You've succeed, by the way, props to you. I'm official addicted and subscribed.
So... should I expect another huge fight between Garrett and Sir Brock?
Let's see; My first reaction was O:
And then I was kind of pissed off because HE WAS NOT DRUNK and MOLLY WAS. What the FUCK was wrong with him?! Was he thinking, 'Oh, it's okay because I've kissed her drunkenly while she's sober & it was okay even though fights followed and blahblahbloo'?
Bitch. I hope he doesn't leave her there, ot I'm going to have to let the Miami-an in me come out & beat his ass with my sneaker.