Sorry I've never commented on this before-it's amazing!! I'm kinda glad there's not gonna be a happy ending. You're right- there's too many flaws in Molly and Kenny's relationship. Besides, there's too many happy endings on this site. I'm in the mood for a little bit of an un-happy ending.
I'm so happy they're going to make up! xD Unless...he messes up again. I hope he doesn't. I love that John Ohhh got mad at her. It kind of shows how much Kennedy means to him as a friend, I think, because he's trying to not let Molly break his heart. Well, more so. And, I think it shows he cares about Molly, too, because, even though he doesn't really know her, he still knows that if she left, she'd regret it, and doesn't want her to go through that heartbreak. xD More soon?
Okay, how do I want this to turn out, well, since you asked... Molly: hey, Kennedy, btw, I'm going to forgive you for being a dick and taking advantage of me, and being a dick and making me cry, and being a dick and making me feel insecure. Kennedy: Oh, really? Well, that's super cool of you, thanks babycakes. Molly: Yeah, I mean, you were totally a douche, but I think you're adorable. Kennedy: Well, you do have a point there. I'm pretty cute. Molly: And I was going to go back and leave, but actually, I don't think I want to anymore. Kennedy: Whoa, really? Molly: Yeah, 'cause you see, the thing is, I basically am in love with you, by the way. Kennedy: Oh my god, ferreals? Molly: Pretty much. Kennedy: SCORE! Okay, this is great. Listen up, girlie, 'cause I want you to know how freaking sorry I am. I didn't ever want to be mean to you or make you cry, but as it turns out, I guess I'm a major dickface and I can't help myself because I love you so much and you can totally crush me and I love you, by the way. Molly: AW. Kennedy: Okay, well, now that we're all good now, let's make out, 'cause that's real fun, okay? okay! And I promise I won't try to bed you again. Molly: Oh, okay. I definitely can't pass up on the opportunity to make out with the Kennedy Brock! THE END!
Haha. I think my plan is awesome. Now for my thoughts. That was not awful. It was lovely, and you rock. I love John in this, but am kind of mad at him anyway. Just because he was a bit harsh with her, but I'm glad he was really cute and talked some sense into her. Basically, John Ohhh is a sweetheart, the end. And I agree with everything Mia says, even if I wouldn't ever forgive any guy who I lost my virginity to when drunk. UPDATE THIS AGAIN GIRLIE. I'll bribe you with an update again. Your choice, K-man, J-dog, G-rizzle :]
Aww she's going to fix it! I'm so excited! I don't even know what else to say. Haha I'm just so stoked. And so crossing my fingers for a happy ending. Oh, and I'm going to read that John story now! Promise!
I had just logged off and then i checked my email and it sad that this story was updated. My face literally went like this -> : D Okay, enough of my fangirl moment. I'm so incredibly happy, you have no idea. This story just makes me happy. It may be weird to some people, but I like the feeling. aha. Well, to start off I love how John's all like "Stop being stupid and give your man a chance!" Your John's amazing compared to mine (: Then Mia shows her sweet side in the end and though she's a little crazy and out there, i love her character<3 The revelation Molly had finally put some sense into her. Kudos to John pointing out she was absorbed on pointing out the wrongs in her relationship with Kennedy. Plus, she didn't get the chance to know the guys since it was basically her mopping about Kennedy or being with him. For that reason that story has layers. I like that it makes me think and it's the kind of love that's just not handed over on a silver platter. It's applicable to real life love and how when you work at it, good things can turn out in the relationship. It pulls my heart strings back and forth and up and down like a rollercoaster. Enjoy every second of it though. For the next part, I actually have no idea what to expect. Surprise me with your fantastical writing skills. They always leave me breathless and I guarantee I'll probably end up tearing up with whatever happens next. That's a first too since no story has ever gotten me so emotionally attached to the characters like yours does. Looking forward to reading more. I'm going to miss this story lots when it's finished. Plus, this update is not a fail at all. Oh yeah and I basically love you (: aha.