Mmmm, have you read the story "Audrey, Wait!" ? Well, it's a published novel and just reading the summary reminded me of it, ha(: I haven't read this story yet, but it sounds amazing.
The scene with Stephen was probably my favourite out of the new chapter. It was just filled with so much emotion and it was so real that it broke my heart. Those moments are what I love the most about these stories of yours because we feel something real while reading it. I loved it very much, =)
I felt the "Finding Jane" vibe for sure... that was just so intense and such a real fictional for me (as I am sure it was for many others) that my heart literally shattered. I loved this chapter so much and hope for more of these channeling vibes.
This chapter makes me sad :( very sad. but also happy cuz you finally updated yay! haha. write more soon!!! you little jerk, have the ending written and won't even share it with the rest of us! the nerve of some people.
So I just read this for the first time. Needless to say that I LOVE it! It makes me hate Joe! And then he gets her the Tootsie Rolls and the Capri Suns and I'm all "What the hell?!" That confuses me:P And I seriously need to know what's going on with Lauren's mom because I friggin love this story and you left me at a cliffhanger. Just so you know:)
Haha, Stephen cracks me up. I love the brother-sister relationship, just how you write those scenes are amazing. I am glad the orphan was updated, and at least it was a good cliffhanger right?
Aww suck a cute chapter with her and her brother. (: I love this story and I will be here till 2012 waiting for you to finish it. ;p Oh well. But seriously this update was amazing.
I thought that was an utterly adorable and sweet chapter. I hate Joe... as per usual, ahaha. And the word count doesn't matter, what matters is that you put your all into this chapter and your heart in it. The flow is pretty good and you captured a really sweet moment with her brother at the end. Amazing chapter Katelyn, =)
Well, it's a published novel and just reading the summary
reminded me of it, ha(:
I haven't read this story yet, but it sounds amazing.