Because of a Song - Comments

  • idswimtheoceann

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    Mmmm, have you read the story "Audrey, Wait!" ?
    Well, it's a published novel and just reading the summary
    reminded me of it, ha(:
    I haven't read this story yet, but it sounds amazing.
    October 11th, 2010 at 08:01am
  • alice liddell.

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    Lauren is such a lovely sister to Stephen <3
    And, even though the chapter was depressing, it was sweet towards the end. I liked it :)
    Update soon.
    September 12th, 2010 at 02:40am
  • cynicalqueen

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    The scene with Stephen was probably my favourite out of the new chapter. It was just filled with so much emotion and it was so real that it broke my heart. Those moments are what I love the most about these stories of yours because we feel something real while reading it. I loved it very much, =)
    September 11th, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • chasethecountylines;

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    Update? Please? I LOVE IT!!!!!!
    September 11th, 2010 at 05:20pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    I felt the "Finding Jane" vibe for sure... that was just so intense and such a real fictional for me (as I am sure it was for many others) that my heart literally shattered. I loved this chapter so much and hope for more of these channeling vibes.
    August 23rd, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • alice liddell.

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    Oh wow, that chapter was sad. So emotional :(
    That's sooo unfortunate! I feel sorry for Lauren and her family.
    Update soon.
    August 17th, 2010 at 02:02pm
  • ch33rali101

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i want another update:)
    August 16th, 2010 at 09:41pm
  • we.are.golden

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    This chapter makes me sad :( very sad. but also happy cuz you finally updated yay! haha. write more soon!!! you little jerk, have the ending written and won't even share it with the rest of us! the nerve of some people.
    August 16th, 2010 at 09:37pm
  • salvatore.

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    So I just read this for the first time. Needless to say that I LOVE it! It makes me hate Joe! And then he gets her the Tootsie Rolls and the Capri Suns and I'm all "What the hell?!" That confuses me:P
    And I seriously need to know what's going on with Lauren's mom because I friggin love this story and you left me at a cliffhanger.
    Just so you know:)
    July 5th, 2010 at 05:13pm
  • SummerRain_401

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    I absolutely love the story, it's great! i hope the next chapter is out soon!
    June 26th, 2010 at 02:08pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Haha, Stephen cracks me up. I love the brother-sister relationship, just how you write those scenes are amazing. I am glad the orphan was updated, and at least it was a good cliffhanger right?
    May 27th, 2010 at 08:01pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    :D plz update fast, cant wait for the rest
    May 26th, 2010 at 02:20am
  • ibelievemyself

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    It's really good!!! Please update soon!!!! Liking it a lot!
    May 25th, 2010 at 02:15pm
  • alice liddell.

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    I feel sorry for Lauren D;
    Well, I'm glad you updated this :D
    Can't wait for more!
    May 25th, 2010 at 10:52am
  • carcrashhearts.

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    HAHAHA. OH MY GOD. I LOVE STEPHEN. :D
    But their mom's in the hospital? D:
    And I love Fearless. (: Such a good song. Haha.
    May 24th, 2010 at 09:58pm
  • bubble332

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    awww that was sooo cute!
    February 28th, 2010 at 01:46am
  • burningchances;

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    Aww suck a cute chapter with her and her brother. (:
    I love this story and I will be here till 2012 waiting for you to finish it. ;p
    Oh well. But seriously this update was amazing.
    February 27th, 2010 at 07:53pm
  • alice liddell.

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    That was such a cute chapter.
    I loved that! :)
    Update soon.
    February 26th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • cynicalqueen

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    I thought that was an utterly adorable and sweet chapter. I hate Joe... as per usual, ahaha. And the word count doesn't matter, what matters is that you put your all into this chapter and your heart in it. The flow is pretty good and you captured a really sweet moment with her brother at the end. Amazing chapter Katelyn, =)
    February 26th, 2010 at 03:32am
  • choirgirlx3

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    magnificent as always keep up the amazing work!!!
    February 26th, 2010 at 12:00am