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MopsHacker (100)

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(PS!) This is all very familiar.

November 24th, 2009 at 04:45am

MopsHacker (100)

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I like it, you two.

~Mo

November 24th, 2009 at 04:42am

panamera (100)

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The rain itself is like a poem.

October 31st, 2007 at 03:31am

Xlindzasaurus_rexX (100)

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^^same here
i did like the ending though
i can't wait for the sequel♥

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October 30th, 2007 at 06:31am

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Woah, yeah... I hope there' s a sequel because the ending made me want another beginning!!!! D:
I loved it.

October 29th, 2007 at 03:45am

frayed ends (100)

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This was an amazing story. I can't wait for the sequel.

October 28th, 2007 at 08:46pm

not-afraid-2-live (100)

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YAY!!!!!!!!! that was sooooo sweet and the perfect ending lol, nice story. Can't wait for the sequel

October 28th, 2007 at 02:23pm

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*New Reader* I absolutely love this story! :D

October 28th, 2007 at 06:24am

Xlindzasaurus_rexX (100)

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Disappeared.:
into_your_icy_blues:
aw, poor Kellee
and can you forget Mike Carden?
but, woot, now Kellee and William are left alone in a room together :]

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Forget Mike Carden? ForGET Mike?!!

How could you. How dare you. I-- no.

Lawn ticket-- update!

gah! not what I meant
I meant that Kellee had forgotten Mike...and I was like "how in heavens name could you forget Mike Carden?" I guess it just came out wrong
anyhow!...
poor William!
they must be together
she must say yes!!
gah! overload...

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October 26th, 2007 at 05:57am

panamera (100)

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into_your_icy_blues:
aw, poor Kellee
and can you forget Mike Carden?
but, woot, now Kellee and William are left alone in a room together :]

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Forget Mike Carden? ForGET Mike?!!

How could you. How dare you. I-- no.

Lawn ticket-- update!

October 24th, 2007 at 07:24am

panamera (100)

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into_your_icy_blues:
aw, poor Kellee
and can you forget Mike Carden?
but, woot, now Kellee and William are left alone in a room together :]

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Forget Mike Carden? ForGET Mike?!!

How could you. How dare you. I-- no.

Lawn ticket-- update!

October 24th, 2007 at 07:24am

frayed ends (100)

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Blahh! they were meant to be!! How can she not see that?

October 23rd, 2007 at 05:43am

Xlindzasaurus_rexX (100)

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sweet you met William!!
i hope i can meet him...i'm going to see them in *counts* 5-6 days, depending on how you count.
anywho,
of course Kellee and William were meant to be!
meh, she must stop doubting this relationship

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October 23rd, 2007 at 03:52am

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aw, poor Kellee
and can you forget Mike Carden?
but, woot, now Kellee and William are left alone in a room together :]

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October 16th, 2007 at 03:51am

Xlindzasaurus_rexX (100)

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Gabe broke up with her then...
mkay,
now she can be with William :]

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October 14th, 2007 at 07:06am

Guy Ripley. (100)

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Goddamn.
I just read this whole thing and LOVED it =D
Ahhh.
I wanted to bitch slap Bill after reading what he had done to her. e.e
But, it's Bill.
Dammit.

But anyhoo...
I love this!
Please update anytime you can. =]

October 11th, 2007 at 08:30am

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If it's ideas you need, and I need them often so this is a really good trick, use songs from whatever band the story is centered around. Take a song and use the basic meaning from that and turn it into a song or use whatever idea springs to mind from what you hear in the song.

October 7th, 2007 at 12:02pm

panamera (100)

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Ugh you need to update now.

I simply must find out what happens next.

October 4th, 2007 at 10:29am

xXmeeseXx (100)

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Use feeling through the song Bring It for the video and everything. Subliminal messages from Beckett and Kellie.... dunno.

Don't let her take him back so easily. He's gotta prove himself to be more loyal than he was. :D

Um, I think that's all I got right now... >_>

October 4th, 2007 at 06:09am

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She talks to Gabe? Meh I am not good with ideas.

October 3rd, 2007 at 09:46am