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  • nicole; sock ownage.

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    Wow, I love this. :]
    Update soon, please!
    October 1st, 2007 at 04:21am
  • m........

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    aww ^.^ whats going to happen now?
    great chapter update soon please
    September 29th, 2007 at 08:05am
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    awwww
    that was sweet
    i can hardly belive William cheated on her in the first place!
    but i guess he did and now they're back together, which is good!
    but what about Gabe? he's gonna be soo heart broken

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    September 28th, 2007 at 05:22am
  • frayed ends

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    Oh my god !! : ) This made me happy XD
    September 27th, 2007 at 04:12am
  • kill the messenger.

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    Oooooh. Manwhore. lol

    I liked the end, how you described it. Nicely written.
    September 26th, 2007 at 05:13pm
  • frayed ends

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    Ahh!! I need to know what happened.
    September 22nd, 2007 at 09:05pm
  • kill the messenger.

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    I like how you've used the italics to highlight thoughts and falshbacks. It gives everything more emphasis. I'd love to know what happened in the seven years between her and William though, although I'm sure it'll be told soon. I can wait. :]
    September 22nd, 2007 at 12:48pm
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    aw, poor Kellee
    what happened between them?
    why is all this happening?
    meh, update soonish so we can find out

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    September 22nd, 2007 at 12:08pm
  • panamera

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    Update already!

    I want to find out what happens!!
    September 21st, 2007 at 12:00pm
  • Undead-Monkey

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    Dude, you have to update, i'm sitting and reading your story on my cell instead of listening to my teacher!!
    Update i love it!
    September 20th, 2007 at 07:18pm
  • kill the messenger.

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    i like how this story had a short intorduction as to what happened before the seven years passed.
    September 18th, 2007 at 07:13pm
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    shit!
    i was not expecting that!
    it's over with William and now she's with Gabe?!
    ack! and now she's forcing herself to throw up?!
    not good!
    PLEASE UPDATE SOONISH!!!!!
    i must know what happens!

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    September 18th, 2007 at 05:57am
  • grandpa_emma

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    wowowow.
    i love this. <333
    greatest story.
    update soon. ^_^_^_^_^
    September 17th, 2007 at 07:09am
  • m........

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    *new reader*
    i love this story its really good update soon!
    September 17th, 2007 at 02:04am
  • frayed ends

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    What?! She's not with Billiam anymore? Ahh!
    September 15th, 2007 at 11:58pm
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    woah, seven whole years?
    aww, she loves him
    how cute
    and Mike has stopped being such a bitch
    woot!

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    September 12th, 2007 at 04:53am
  • frayed ends

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    7 years?? Hmm I wonder where they are.. Aha.
    September 9th, 2007 at 11:10pm
  • kill the messenger.

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    wow, just started reading, this is really good. : ]
    September 9th, 2007 at 05:48pm
  • frayed ends

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    I want to see Will and Kellee together. This is a very cute story.
    September 6th, 2007 at 06:55am
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    yay an update!!
    oh my...that was soo sweet!
    Kellee and Will are together-ish
    *is happy happy*

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    September 6th, 2007 at 03:18am
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