Slaves Of The Darkness - Comments

i don't know how mibba managed to hide this story from me for so long, but I've just finihed reading it, and have to vommend you for it :) it was really gripping! i wish you could have spared phoebe though :(
off to read the sequel now! :D x

I REALLY loved your story. It definitely wasn't like the other slave/master stories. For one thing Phoebe didn't fall in love her Master. Also I love how it ended. Even though it was incredibly sad, atleast you know she'll be at peace instead of being stuck in that horrible place and it kind of gives it like a finalization feel. This story is amaaaazziiinnnggg.. One of the best. (: Gonna go read the Novella of Maggie now.

I absolutely hated the ending I was really hope that maybe just maybe it would happen she would live and everything would be okay. Almost made me want to cry.

You put hair and it should be here
and I'm not sure if you spelled fiber right you put it as fibre and that might be accepted in some place so yeah

OMG!!! SHE DIES! JUAT WHEN LAURENCE STARTS SHOWING HIS GOOD SIDE!! HOW COULD YOU!!!

Stupid Pheobe! But, then again she's going through a lot, I should be sympathetic towards her situation. I sure as hell wouldn't know what to do.
Great update! I'm off to read Dangerous Vices now :)

OH MY GOD, YOUR A GENIUS!!!!! hahahaha I am glad I helped :) it was amazing!!! Hahaha!!! I am happy that I helped now :D I cant wait to see how you ended it!!!

so im bored at home, school hasnt started yet and i read every book i checked out from the library two days ago. i found this stroy and it...was....WOAH!!! amazing! i think youve inspired me to write a story of my own!
i cant wait for the last update (even though i just started reading it and finished it all!)
great story!!!!!!!!

Almost over *sad face* But, at least there's the Maggie novella to look forward to.
I want to say more soon, but I don't want it over to quick. *sighs* Amazing story/chapter regardless.
I'm gonna miss it when it's over

i LOOOOOVEDDD this chapter. though i do have a few questions.
if this story is ending soon, are you going to explain what she is??
and because of what she is, lucas shouldnt have been able to brand her, right?? how come he was able to?
and she hasnt submitted to anyone this WHOLE time, which makes me happy :D
alright well thats about it, later!! cant wait for the next one.

About time he got to her.
He shouldn't have waited for her to call :|
I'm glad Lucas is dead, he deserves it and so does his wife. Ha.
Anyway, it's ending already?
Aw, well can't waitttt.

And if I am one of the first five, please do not send me anything lol.
I'd like to read it when it's out. [:

It's nit bribery if we were going to comment anyways

yay Lucas is dead -does the happy dance-

Yay she spit on him

yay Laraunce is there and no dying for Phobe hopefully

boo only one or two chapters left

I loved that chapter! I loved Laurence's good side, showing that he actually cares for her! I'm sad the story is coming to an end, but I really want to know what happens next! LIVE PHEOBE, LIVE!!!

That was an amazing chapter!!! I was so proud of Pheobe when she spit Lucas's... stuff all over him. And, I loved Laurance in this chapter, he was so adorbale. Well, half the time. Like when he called her pet first, when she answered the phone, and when he said that if she died on him, he'd be disappointed and she would be punished<-- That was actually my favorite part of the chapter. Anyway, I can't stand the thought of this story being over. I'm gonna be sad when it comes to the last chapter :( But, oh well, all good things must come to an end.
Update soon... or don't, cause that postpones the ending of the story :)))

This is really good :D
I love it!
Keep writing!!

awww i feel so sorry 4 her :( but i really would love another update, your story is still going great.

I hate Lucas to the thought of him makes me want to shudder
I would've suspected Lucas above anyone else if I was Laurance

Wow, I hate Lucas.
She needs to be saved, like NOW.

Yay! You've updated again :D I missed this story
And, of course, Lucas still makes me sick. I'd like to pull each one of his teach out with pliers and see how he likes that.
Laurence needs to come save her!!!
Another update would be lovely :)

This is really good!
Please update soon:D

i dont think you need to keep maggie in the story.. her character is better unknown..

i like you story evn if its that harsh it keeps all of us interested..
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