Slaves Of The Darkness - Comments

oohh love the new style :) n effects were good aswell

just keep this chapter, it sounds like something he would do. and you portrayed it very well in my opinion...(also never done speed so it seemed fine to me lol)
and im just guessing shes doing it cuz chris got to her about the whole "looking out" for everybody thing. i wouldnt want to ruin my chances of help even if the guy did scare me to death!!
hope to read another update soon!

Aw, poor Cyrus :[ I hate when he gets hurt.
And, damn Christopher, this is all his fault. He claims that he tries to help her but it only gets her into deep shit.

This chapter was pretty intense. Laurence did some... creative (is that the word) stuff. I thought the chapter was great, as weird as that sounds.

Update soon!!!

Omg he drugged her that's very bad.
And why is she protecting Christpoher she is obiviously very strong willed because I would've told on him so fast.
I like a mixture of bith the soft writing and the harsh cynicak writing it keeps it realistic and edgy. ♥

hi im your newest subscriber C:
I think Laurence should come back :D

now i do hate him but i think laurence should come back n kick cyrus out :) dunno y i jst dont like him one bit

So who is getting bored of the rather safe pattern Phoebe has fallen into? Who wants to see a big, bad master return? Do you want Lucas, Clara or Laurence?

Hmmm. Christopher went crazy. I know his intentions was good (hopefully) but no i'm still with him he is just trying to help her and right now I think being creul to her is his only way since words don't seem to help. I would like to see more bad characters again meh heart is aching for badness.
Another brawl between Lucas and Laurance would be nice.
lol their names both start with L. Like Christopher and Cyrus lol.

Well, I know Christopher has good intentions and is trying to teach Pheobe how to like be agressive, but I'm not veryy happy with him. Especially after how mean he was to Cyrus. After all, Cyrus is one of my favorite characters, and he needs all the help he could get. Not to mention he's so nice.

Anyway, I'm done ranting. Update soon!

We love you too and you're welcome. Well... It seems that she may have no one to trust after all... Even now I'm not so sure about Valerie... and if there's anyone she can trust, its Valerie.

i want lucas or laurence to come back they were fun in a weird sort of way hahaha

Slaves of darkness, and please update

Awww, poor Cyrus, but I'm still on Christopher's side. I vote for slaves of Darkness.

Cyrus is to sweet...sweet guys are always the ones that break your heart sooo im on christophers side

aw poor cyrus

Hmmmm. Airheart.101 might be right
but c'mon I like benefit of doubt I just like to see good in everyone.

Isn't it nice to see everyone all safe and sound from violence without Laurence around?
Haha you rhymes

who cares? It’s just master’s linen.
Has she learned nothing I feel like Laurancing her right now

Call me cynical but I think Christopher has the most realistic posibility. Wasn't Cyrus supposed to have been completely broken by his master? It said so when they first saw eachother again... And where did he even get the chocolate from?
I vote for "Slaves of Darkness" by the way:]

Aw, but I love Cyrus and he needs the help. I know Christopher's trying to look out for her, but I don't think she should listen. Pheobe's doing the right thing by helping Cyrus :D

Update soon!

Something's... odd... about Christopher.... *spooky music plays*
Dun-dun-duuunnnn.
Yes. Anyway.

Loveth your writing lots - it's not easy to have so many characters and still manage to write so thst the readers can keep up with them - but you do that perfectly!
As we used to say (well, me and my geek friends still say it) in England; 'I take my hat off to you!'
:D x

Hi!!!!
Well, okay, so I'm a new reader/commentor/soon to be subscriber once I finish writing this comment =D

I just want to let you know that this is a pretty awesome-tastic story. It's fun to read, and you've done a really great job. I've read ALL 26 chapters straight, I just didn't want to stop.

Anyway, I love Cyrus. He seems really sweet and nice. As is Christopher. And, Laurence is well... interesting. I bet he'd be awesome if he admitted his true feelings :D

Oh, yeah, by the way. The chapter title- 'Slave of Darkness' I believe (it was one of the first one's that had 3 people who liked it- is pretty awesome!

Wow, this was a ridiculously long comment. I have a problem with doing that sometimes :]

Update soon!

Slaves of the Darkness is my choice. Love the story and can't wait to find out whats going on with Cyrus but am kind of agreeing with the other commenters on being a spy....can't wait to read more =)