Without a Sound - Comments

Here from comment swap.

Been awhile since you've gotten a comment, it appears. I loved your story, so much. I finished it in an entire sitting. I don't even know where to start, man. I love the way you characterized everyone, especially Mikey. I loved the plot and asdfghjkl everythinhg. Okay? We'll just leave it at that. This was also my first Mikey Way fic, so congratulations for making it a great first one. Okay so I love you so much for writing this. That's all. Cheers!

Okay, So i'm going to read the rest of this later, but its 3:30am, and I'm yearning for sleep but I'm doing this for comment swap. I've read the first chapter, and already i'm hooked! I'm guessing Mikey's the narrator. I love how you explained how its like in the tomb, how he would enjoy the sound of rain, or he could sense people. I love this story already so far. I'll comment again after I finish it, I'm guessing it's complete? :) Can't wait to read more.

To be honest with you, I don't really like MCR and I didn't read through this thoroughly, but obviously you don't need me from the other comments you have gotten :) You're writing style is nice :) I enjoyed some of it and I didn't read through all, but all and all it's still nice :D

Well, looks like fauntleroy and I are a a little late XD
This has to be one of my absolute favorite stories on this entire site. I'm so glad I stumbled upon it(:

so i finally finished the story. ):
it was sad to see it end, and maybe you can do a sequel about them with a kid?
i loved this story, it was very well written and i liked that you didn't rush into anything.
the characters all stayed the same and it was an amazing story.
:D

im on chapter 39 currently, and im loving every minute of it.
though, mikey is not particularly my favorite, i lovee this because
he fits the character so well.
ive been reading this story all day, and ive found it in story finders forum.
:D
ill comment again once im through, but i just had to tell you that i adore it
even before im done.

A sequel sounds like a good idea

Hey, I just finished reading this story and I thought I should let you know how much I thoroughly enjoyed it. This piece kept me up until 1:30 in the morning because I just simply couldn't stop reading.

I adored the characterization but most of all I enjoyed how you constructed Charlotte's character. Through the entire piece she kept this almost childlike innocence and naivety that really helped connect the atmosphere of the story.

The Color Abi Fazzi recommended this story to me on the Story Finders thread and I'm so unbelievably glad she did. I believe she's hoping for a sequel. I can't speak for anyone else but I'd definitely be up - I don't think I'm ready to let go of Charlotte and Mikey just yet.

So yeah, I don't think I have anything more to say other than to thank you for this wonderful piece. :D Take care.

I love this story! It's so original! It's amazing, keep 'em coming!

This is amazing. Truly, truly, truly amazing. I love you for this.

I love it you should make a seaquil that would be awesome

I- I- I can' believe it's over.
The ending was beautiful
I've just commented on your new story.

You're on of the best writers on this site
One of my favourite writer on this site.

I love your work so much!

awww its so sad. it can't be over awww. it was amazing.

It's so sad this is the end.

But I definitely loved this story while it lasted.

And definitely was a great ending.

You really do have amazing writing skills.

This has definitely been one of my favorite stories ever.

Thank you for this amazing story.

:XD

I still can't believe it is over.

I'm sad to see it go, but it as a beautiful way to do so.

aaaaaaaaaa im so sad that this is the end
BUT you did a fantabulous job and the story was AMAYZING!
ahh i cant believe it is over!! it was SUCH a good story!
:P GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazingness! I hate that it's the end but I loved the chapter and the whole story!
I'll keep my subscription to the story so it keeps its 10 stars. =D
Again, I loved the whole story! <33333

haha i think that does make mikey crazy. and i am so sad to see this story end. its going to be so sad! :[ update wicked soon!

noooooo i dont want it to end!!!!!! :( :'(

I can't believe this is so close to the end...
You must start another story soon and tell me about it!
I will cry and cry if I have no more of your work to read :cry:

I love it how Mikey wants her and wants her baddddddddddddd:tehe: