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Jsyk, I just re-read this entire story because I love it so much. It's absolutely adorable.
Soon I'll have to re-read streetlights ^_^

Alright, so I have no idea why I decided i should go ahead and read a tom story, cause I just dont. I dont even know why i dont, its not like hes not attractive or anything, but i decided to read this. And its fucking amazing. Its all lovelydovey and cutesey for like the first 1-7 chapters in the sense that there both shy, and she has a reason to be shy. she just moved across the contry, no doubt i would have been shy too. And then it starts heating up a little, when they start to feel more comfortable around eachother. and i just think its bloody adorable <3 <3 :D

Love this, ty for this story, gunna go read the prequel,,, or sequel. i dont know.. im a bit of a moron. And ima comment on that one too, as soon as I finish it. Sorry this was a rushed comment, just hopped on my brothers computer real fast as he took a dump (ew. and grounded) T.T

THANKS :]

amazing. i cried

okay, so i read this all last night. from 9pm to 1pm hahaa! i was completely dead this morning, waking up at midday. anyways, i totally love this story, i love how shy tom was and wasnt around madison. & the bit with the heart moniter was just making me grin like an idoit! pretty sure if that was me my heart would have like burst or something haha. i hate her mum D: making her move away from tommy boy, after they were just getting so much better with each other. & that jack guy was a jerk >; & i dont like mercy either, what a freak. so glad that madison and tom got together, but then she had to leave D: but im so stoaked that there is a sequel because i will be subscribing to that because this story was flipping amazing :D i love your stories and am glad i sumbled along to your stories! :D

EDITED: Sorry about the double comment. I clicked it twice [eager to get rid of it and read the sequel~]

Anyhoo, I really hope that you get youre 500 comments. You're like, 20 way from it.

Personally, I think you deserve way more. :file: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

I’ve read this story awhile back [thanks to formerlyknownas [yes, no, I dunno...] but I’m not sure whether or not I commented.
But I am now.
I’m happy that this is about Tom. Not many people give him the light he deserves. It’s always shining on tattooed Oli~

I don’t remember where I’ve stopped so I guess I have to read it over? Haha. No worries. :]

~I like how shy Tom acts. It’s adorable.

~The part scene…hmm. Magically vanished I see…

~I can totally relate on the whole “I miss American TV.” When I first moved, TV sucked like hell. I thought I was in hell.
I mean, have you ever watched television with subtitles? Weird. But now, I’m used to it. And the language change.
As long as I can watch the O.C. in pure English I’m content. XD

~Him forcing her to take a ride, funny. :)

~Aww. The “points at him then at me” thing was so cute. I’d never have the guts to do that.

~I’ve noticed you always apologize for the mistakes? How about correcting them? Not that I’ve seen any so far. Maybe cuz I wasn’t looking for them. Hah.
And you’re story is pretty good.  It’s no Gravity [you and I agree] but it sure is something. It hooked me almost as much as Sam’s Oli story.
If that doesn’t tell you how good this is, ‘ow bout how much Sam [the greatest young writer I know] loves it?? :D

And because of the whole sequel thing I kind of forgot about this story. Don’t worry, I subscribed. I’m not a fool twice. ^^’

Already on chapter 9. Hurray! Slow but good start, I’m catching up to where I was last.
And I’m so giddy because you made Oli out to be a nice guy for once rather than some mean asshole that pees on people…

~Bitchy much? I hate being misunderstood. And sometimes people just got to learn to listen! xD

~Okay, before I read on, when he said get dizzy I was thinking “hmmm, kiss her maybe?” haha.

…OMG! Haha. Tease! I knew the beeping would rat her out. I was hoping more him then her, but I’ll take what I can get.

~That is so me! I would have kissed him and then pretend and drive him crazy for driving me crazy. But of course, my mind only comes alive after.…

“Too busy letting my eyes wander around the ground, I didn’t notice Tom’s hand creeping closer to mine again until his skin brushed against my own. Slightly startled by the touch, my head snapped in his direction. He was looking down at the sidewalk as his palm cupped mine. His skin was smooth and warm against mine own. I knew my hands were a bit rough from my rock climbing habit back in America, but he didn’t seem to notice or care.”

Aww, aww, fuckin’ aww! :XD

O_O “‘Why haven’t we fucked yet?”

Okay, so I totally don’t think this is Tom. Maybe it’s Oliver. Of course it’s Oliver. Durrh. *goes to see…*

Yay! I’m right! Haha.

I get giddy no matter what really. Any comment, message, text from any one, my heart races. ^^’ That’s just me.
Now, a guy – oh boy~ I’d prob break poor Madi’s heart monitor~ Try imagining one I actually fancy.

Lmao. I’d so totally watch every time too. I’m obsessed with guys’ hair~

HAHA. Aww. Sweet. :) And I would text instead of whisper – hands down. XD

Nope. Nothing ‘majorly’ [on Word, this isn’t a word. Lol] noticeable. They’re so small you could like check through and fix it.
Then you wouldn’t need to apologize. :D

“I let out an involuntary squeal of happiness, my mom staring at me like I was an idiot.”

I don’t even have to say it. *So me*

…won’t he hear her? Haha.

~ Okay, so far, Chapter 15 is my fave! xD
I hate little kisses – but they’re better than nothing. Haha. Still, I know you know what I mean. :crazy:

~Chapter 16 – Aww. Your own love story. Anything like Tom and Madison’s – you’ve got yourself a lifetimer. Winks

~Okay, so I thought it was the J-named girl but I confuse the two too much. I was thinking the bitchy-one the whole time. I knew it was someone she knew! Bitch!
How dare she do that to Tom? So that’s why she’s accusing Madi.
Haha. Wow, I’m either really smart or you just made it really obvious. How about we go with the former hmm? :mrgreen:

Hmm? Was Janie [dunno her name still…] telling Mercy? WOW.

~It always, always, always ends up in a drama-fight! Grr. Stupid stubborn people, hehe.

~I’ve always wanted to skateboard. Too chicken to attempt alone, to shy to ask for help.

My heart is doing this painful drum beat against my chest…it’s getting bothersome. Damn, Tom. You make him sounds so…ooohh~

~Chapter 21: Lmao. Sam is Sam? Was so caught up in it didn’t even cross my mind. Her helping you makes this story twice as great. :) Two is always better than one.

~Sweet! They’re together!

~Okay, you hurt me in the process. Maybe she was telling him about how Madi told her about her plan to do something with Jack and backstab Tom or something? Haha. That just sorta formed in my head. It’s incoherent I know..

~WHOA! Haha. I liked the car-scrapping part. Good add. :) Jack-ass. :grr:

~Awwh! [have I said this too much?] Oli is so eeeeeeeeep! I want him! Haha. As an older brother. Tom, though, *wiggles eyebrows*

~THEY MADE UP! YAY! HAHA…Am I wrong to think they had an off thing? Well, whatever. I’m satisfied. :XD

~Loved how Sam kicked him and muttered “Stay down.” Haha.
And that fight was amazing! Hah.
Okay, I’m not one for violence but I always enjoy a nice punch.
[Mainly one’s involving Ryan’s hand and Oliver’s nose. Haha. (The O.C. reference.) ]

~Well, I was getting ready for the dirty-dirty but then I didn’t exactly peg you for one to write sex scenes [don’t worry, that’s a good thing… I think?]
You see, I had a bath and I didn’t want to wet myself [giggles] but whatever. The excitement of them being inexperienced did it anyways.
I could be lying….I could not be. :mrgreen:

~I knew it. Stupid chocolate! :grr:

~I hate GOODBYES! :cries: I really do.

And yesh. I read this all in about 4 hours [including bathroom break, TV time, chatting, checking the Oli story, writing this comment, oh and swooning at the end of each chapter] Haha. You are officially my…okay, so I dunno how many I have to be able to place yeh but…top 5 on Mibba sound good? :arms:

Sequel. Cool. Keep the love flowing. I really hope it’s not some stupid love thing that happens to stitch her heart back together. I WANT TOM!

Right so I know this is finished and there is a sequel and everything but it's my first time read a Tom Sykes story and so far I love it.
Hehe

I'm happy I chose this one, = )
And as soon as I've finished reading this and I'm up to date on the sequel I'll be commenting, a lot

= )

WTF I AM SUBSCRIBED TO THIS STORY AND MIBBA DIDNT TELL ME THAT YOU UPDATED I DIDNT EVEN KNOW ABOUT THE SEQUEL

So I know this is over and shit, but I just couldn't not comment. Fuckin' Mibba didn't send me the updates, so I just now read the rest ( :[ ) and fucking loved it as always. But before I start the sequel, I had to tell you that when I read the fight scene with Lee, I literally had to Google a photo of him so I could picture it just right. I pissed myself. You are a brilliant writer, and I'm heading to the sequel now!

you made me cry with the last chapter. i seriously was weeping when i was reading it and after i turned off the computer!!! NOO!!!! i hate her mom! GOD!

but it was written well and nice. loved it :)

OH! If there is any form of a sequel, I want to read it so badly!
You left me craving for more. (Ha ha- tease!)

sequel sequel
they belong together.

NOOOOOOOOOOO WHY'D YOU MAKE HER HAVE TO MOVEEEE =[[[[

You better write a sequel!!!
That was such a sad ending!!!
Awesome story, sad ending

Holy lord, that was heartbreaking.
I really, really hope there is a sequel.

O.O Holy shit Holy shit Holy Shit Holy Shit Holy Shit Holy shit. HOLY MOTHER FREAKING SHHHHHIIIITTTTTT!!!!!!

I have to admit, I teared up. You can't debate on anything, the way you left this story there is a NEED to write a sequel.

I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! AHHH!

Amazing

Omb this is so sad! I want to cry so much right now. Please make a sequal this is like the best story I ever read!!!!! Please!!!! Ill bake you tons of cookies!!!! Give you bags of skittles!!!! Anything!!!! Just please make a sequal!!!!

<3 KC

I hope her mom realizes she is ruining her daughter's life. She needs a reality check, pronto. But in amazingly good news, your story is BOMB. Completely amazing and if you don't write a sequel, I will have to live with that sad ending. So, you can make it better by writing a sequel. Hop to it girl! Your an amzing writer. I can't wait!!! :D
*gives you a huge ass hug* ^_^

: [ If my mom was like that-no lies-there'd be a throwdown. wtf?

but your story is amazingggggggggggg

sequel? :D

the last chapter was so sad.. I can't believe her mom is like.. that ._.