Stay Close, Don't Go - Comments

aww! sweet love making.

I hope they use a fucking condom, they're to yound to have a baby sykes

I love. End of story.

:)

YESSSSSSSSS!
God, I was hoping that would happen. And it was adorable and awkward and adorable and GOD I LOVED IT, it was everything I hoped it would be. :D
Two left now, right? Or is it three?
I like to pretend it's never going to end. :)

Not cheesey. Epic! I heart you and this story lmao & you should post the rest, I would then be able to die happy XD

I love the protectiveness of all the boys. It's so cute :)

Can't wait for the next updates!

whoa, intense...
please please post more!
i fucking love this.

yesss three updates :D
haha I soooo happy oliver beat jack up. pshh cause jacks an a$$ whole xD
sleeeepovaa :D

That was AWESOME. I felt like a badass just reading it. :D Jack is such a little girl.
And Madi and Tom are adorable, as usual. And she's sleeping ovahhhhh! God, I hope they do it.
Are Sam and Curits going to be present at this sleepover? ;)

hahaha i LOVE soap opera fights! and i loved this chapter too. as if its coming to an end real soon, thats so disappointing :( is there gonna be a sequel? yesyesyes please :)

Post it in the middle of the night!
I need more Tom/Madison lovin. :cute:

Damnnn O.O Go Lee! lmao & you should post something in the middle of the night :) It would give me somehting to do, aimlessly surfing the net get's boring xD

SEX!!!! i smell SEX!!!! WHOOOOO!!!! SEX!

sorry. im a bit hyper. but i do...think...that.,..sex....is....next!
whoo! yes? no?

aweosme chapter, you robot. xD

if i were oliver i'd fucking beat the crap out of jack!
jack'll go to hell someday, so will mercy - fucking eeevvviiilll people!!!
love the update. Aw, tom and Madi. they're so fucking cute..

Tom is so cute. :cute:

I think jack needs a good drop-kick in the face. Seriously.
BUT, I'm so glad Madi and Tom fixed everything :]
I dunno and Lee stories but this has the cutest little Lee bits in it.

That was...well....Go Oli! i believe that sums it all up. :]
and im glad Tom didnt freak out too badly.
She should have been his first concer though, ill say that. :]
but it was great. and i sooo dont want it to end.

and if you catch wind of any good Lee stories will you tell me? he's so flippin adorable.

I hope Oli runs over Jack's face.
Then shifts into reverse and runs over him again.

you updated!!!! haha, thankyou! i like how that little episode was.. quick? hmm, in a lot of stories sometimes the drama goes on and on and on. (not saying thats a bad thing, it was just good to have a slight difference) haha. thankyou!! only 3/4 chpaters to go!!!! :O xxxx

Oliver's being such a sweetie. I wish I had a "brother from another mother" (best worst joke ever) like him.
Tommy Tom.... Tom.... you're an idiot. You were speaking to Mercy because "you didn't want to be a douche" but that's exactly how you were acting towards Maddie. Jerk.
I agree with Tom's last line, though. I hope Jack gets the schnitzel beaten out of him- SHOW NO MERCY! (Ha, that was a bad wording joke. I know I'm lame.) I have an idea! Oliver could put Jack's feet in a tub of wet cement and wait until it dries... then throw him in the ocean! Revenge is sweet.

They are too cute for words. I want them to get married and have little science-project-doing, blue-eyed babies. Lots of them.
Seriously, this was adorable. I love how Oliver came to get her and acted all big brotherly. It fits him. :D
Personally, I would have enjoyed Sam making an appearance and knocking Jack's teeth in. Just sayin'. Because the real Sam would really enjoy that.
And you have more written! So SOON!?!?!?! :D