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  • Too Many Lies

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    erghhh.
    I always get a tiny bit sad when I finish reading each chapter.
    I just want it to keep going!
    But I can't wait for the next update!
    :]
    March 28th, 2009 at 02:09am
  • floatinginthedark

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    this is so great :]
    March 28th, 2009 at 12:37am
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    This is totally beast!!! I love stuff about Tom....I know you wrote an Oli story, and I mean nothing offensive to you when I say this, but I kinda think Oli's been a little over-used in stories....thanx for writing this =D
    March 27th, 2009 at 02:59pm
  • Mishy

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    Great story!
    I've just read it all up until now :)
    Your story makes me think about more about Tom ahaha
    (Not that I am now xD)
    March 27th, 2009 at 08:33am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Got to love Tom. Even though they haven't been chatting eachother up, it's nice to read about a more shy boy (even though the confident guy is nice, too). It's a different take on starting relationships, which I really like.
    The pace works well also because it gradually shows change and keeps all the readers anxious.

    P.S. When I first read your P.S. I was like "Psh, I couldn't care less about the heart, so what does it matter if the information is correct." Then I felt really bad and apologized to my heart for being mean. Though I still don't care if the information is true or false.
    March 27th, 2009 at 06:46am
  • Kevin Jonas

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    Gotta love Tom Sykes' shyness (:
    This is incredible.
    March 27th, 2009 at 06:12am
  • sh3nanigans

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    Awh! You're making me like Tom moreeee.
    xD

    +Great chapters! i loved them both!
    I need to start check more often! Haha!
    March 27th, 2009 at 05:55am
  • formerlyknownas

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    Gahhhh, I'm sensing DRAMAAAAA with that Jack kid. I'm sofa king excited. I saw you updated and like had to go change my underwear, I was so excited.
    Great update. :D
    March 27th, 2009 at 05:24am
  • neat-o

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    I liked this update,and i cannot
    wait till i find out what goes down during there 'project' hang out.
    :D
    March 27th, 2009 at 04:40am
  • Highly Suspicious

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    Another update so soon?! You're a fuckin' god.
    March 27th, 2009 at 04:30am
  • orlando weeks.

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    i fucking heart this.
    ;D
    March 27th, 2009 at 04:13am
  • brightbluelights

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    I love it.
    Can't wait and see what happens next!
    March 27th, 2009 at 03:46am
  • creativeconvulsions.

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    your doing really well with this story!
    its like i can feel their akwardness when i read it hahaha
    March 27th, 2009 at 03:43am
  • cherryc0la

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    i can do nothing but smile when i read this story.
    March 27th, 2009 at 03:25am
  • Lady_Plague_6661

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    This, right here, did not suck in any way, shape or form. so i think you should like it.
    cause i do. (:
    haha who ever does look up stuff like school projects? lol
    March 27th, 2009 at 03:14am
  • FTS.brittni.

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    I am in love.

    Pure, unconditional love for this story.

    I can't wait for an update!

    Definitely subscribing to this one :)
    March 27th, 2009 at 03:00am
  • Lady_Plague_6661

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    You're just gonna leave me like that!?!?!?
    Gah. i need to know what the projct is! I bet its gonna be something embarrasing!
    lol. xD
    And i really do love this story, my dear. For one thing you write beautifully and its Tom story--and NOT OLI--and although, i love Oli. I love reading about Tom even more because there arent many! (:
    March 26th, 2009 at 11:44pm
  • Too Many Lies

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    I have to say,
    this story is my favorite so far on mibba.
    :]
    March 26th, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • ladyvader

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    Love this story! All the thanks goes to formelyknownas. Definately subscribing!
    March 26th, 2009 at 06:14pm
  • proverbial sunrise.

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    i like this story very much.
    + i enjoy the constant updates (:
    March 26th, 2009 at 05:50pm
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