Bitten - Comments

alphadisaster:

118 READERS! YAY! *dances*
One more subscriber and I'll have four stars total!
You guys are awesome for reading my story.

FOUR STARS!!!!! THANK YOU TIM!!!! I love you!

Saying-I'm-So-Sorry:

Love this
Tis truely amazing
Can't wait to see the sequel

Thanks!
Well I'm working on one write now!

Love this
Tis truely amazing
Can't wait to see the sequel

118 READERS! YAY! *dances*
One more subscriber and I'll have four stars total!
You guys are awesome for reading my story.

lol...I’m so happy he liked it...
Aww thank you...
i have no confidence so you're not alone...lol
lol...maybe I should start a sequel....
lol...William’s character in this is the total opposite of his real life character which is what I was going for...so thanks for noticing it.
I think almost every character had opposite behaviors except for Pat, Andy, and Joe

its amazing that william liked it
and you are an incredible writer
its important that you have self confidence
even though i dont
but you really should keep writing
i need to read the sequel
and as much as i hate william
he basically kept up the whole i'm evil thing through out this story
so i kinda like him

wow this was amazing
plz tell me when you put the sequel up

Tambry:

dude why cant willem die already damnit!!!!!! i want him DEAD! in q fucking MORGE (sorry if i spellt it wrong lol!!!) but im happy for pete!!!!!!!!!!

lol...maybe in the second story he'll die

dude why cant willem die already damnit!!!!!! i want him DEAD! in q fucking MORGE (sorry if i spellt it wrong lol!!!) but im happy for pete!!!!!!!!!!

did you know WIlliam Beckett actually read bitten? Im serious! I had a friend go to one of his concerts and asked if he read fanfiction and he said yes...then she brought up mine...HE REMEMBERED IT! Plus he liked it and told her to tell me to keep up writing...William come on....I SUCK AT WRITTING!

well..I use Brendon, Pete, and William cause i based my story off of "a little less sixteen candles a little more touch me" video....and those are the characters in the video...lol
btw thank you both of you

holy shit this is awesome! i have 1 question thought why do u people keep useing brendon, pete, williom and all the other dudes i like the story but why do u use the charecters?!? :think: :crazy: :?: :D

wow. please update...will a virtual smile make you update??
:D
there. please update!