So I'm in class right now and I had to print out the first chapter because our internet wouldn't let me read it because its considered, "Pornography". Which is bull cause when I did read it I was like, "What the fuck? I don't see any porn!" Anyways, just by reading the first chapter, I'm kinda thinkin' that this is the best fanfic I've ever read and I've only gotten the first chapter under my belt. You're a fantabulous writer. Do this for a living. PLEASE.
okay now I've read the rest, and wootwooot...it's great... but it can't rech the first chapter because THAT was the most amazing thing ever...but I'm stoked about the following chapters...so hurry up ;D
okay I've only read the first chapter (TILL NOW), and it's horrible...I'm crying ...it's so sad it's...fuck it's generous...I think no one ever wrote a fan fic that way...it's...amazing... argh....this was so sad...did I mentioned that I'm crying right now...still?...yeah... ok so I'm going to read the other chpters right now... and if I knew where I o could give you stars I'd totally give you 10 but I don't know how...do you know how?
i just read chapter two and decided to comments again now I dont feel so depressed because oli didnt die in that one but i just had to say i love this story oh and i forgot to say i really LOVE your summary!
oh my God this story is incredible! that was scary and sad and i only read the first chapter so far but... HOLY SHIT! how do you not have ten stars!!!!!!
I'm not going to lie, this made me cry. It was so bloody good. Write something happy next time? Then go on with sad stuff, then happy... It'll balance things out for me (;
Which is bull cause when I did read it I was like, "What the fuck? I don't see any porn!"
Anyways, just by reading the first chapter, I'm kinda thinkin' that this is the best fanfic I've ever read and I've only gotten the first chapter under my belt.
You're a fantabulous writer.
Do this for a living.
PLEASE.
Love,
Danielle Kramer