Wow...that was great! I really mean it. I've never been so emotionally attached to a story, and it wasn't because you made me cry -because you didn't- or the fact that you totally get my sense of humor (which absolutely do, even though I found your Dolly Gunn story funnier)! I don't know why I was soooo....fuck, what word do I use here? I love you and I think you should have been published a long time ago. There. That is all. :)
Can I just say a big thank you for writing such a great story? THANK YOU. Gosh, I loved reading this. Here I was, looking for a story to kick off my summer vacation, and here it is! I loved loved loved Tennessee (what a tricky name to spell TT) & Ben, they aren't the perfect couple, but I love them. And I also really liked Paul... poor Paul. :|
I'll look into more of your work later on, you're a really promising writer :D
I just read this last night and I didn't leave a comment casuse it was two in the morning and my keyboard is loud so it would've woken up my parents... so... here goes my epic coment on this EPIC story, prepare yourself mentally.
OMG.
I am like a valley fan girl for the story. It's beautiful! I saw it on Project Fiction before and I was like "Eh, I dont really wanna read it" but then I read FL, LF and Glitter Babies by you and I was like, well okay then I guess I have to read thsi because it's on the "Good List" so I did.
AND DAMN WHY DIDN'T I READ IT BEFORE?! I LOVE IT! At first I was like OMG BEN IS DEAD. Go for Paul go for Paul!
AND THEN HE WASN'T DEAD! I was about to kill you for that btw, I was like awe now poor Paul. But at the end of the story, I didn't like Paul much. you converted me to "GO HAVE SEXI TIME WITH BEN BECAUSE HES AMAZING" and I love tatoos dearly... :)
But seriously, beautifully written and told, amazingly depthful characters, beautful setting and plot, just a breathtaking story...
and after that deep moment I leave you with this because it's what I did after I read this (and I've been dying to use this gif):
I just read this whole thing, and my fucking gosh, it was amazing. I felt everything that went on. I seriously got so sad at the parts where she rejected Ben and when she told Paul she didn't want him. I would write a waaaaaay better comment but I was supposed to be sleeping an hour ago, so I will just let you know that this story is so amazing. I LOVED IT.
*spazzes* Best. Story. Ever. First off, great character description. Loved the way it flowed. Loved the layout. I feel close to Tennesse, and I feel bad for Paul. I felt the heat with Ben and Tenny. I was soooo happy when I found out that he hadn't died. :D
I really found no fault with this story at all. I seriously feel like giving you a big ole cyber hug just for writing this. Fo'serious. *huggles* THANK YOU! :))) <3
This is amazing. There are no other words for it, nothing I can really say to explain it, but the while vibe of the story is just enchanting. Terrific job (:
Wowww, I just finished this & had to tell you it's completely amazing. I love the characters, the story, the everything. You did remarkable things here.
Oh my my, that was amazing. The way you write is extravagant and I applaud your work. Simply addicting, I loved it. Really good work, hope to read more! Liebe!
Ben and Tenny were absolutely adorable!! I really enjoyed this story. I felt as though, when I read it, I could feel its importance to you. Everything about it was lovely. The images at the top and lyrics at the bottom of each chapter added so much, too. I loved your attention to detail. This was an absolute delight to read :)
That was great, your great. Ben and Tennessee were great. Great great great great great(: Just in case my message wasn't clear enough, I thought your story was reaply GREAT.! I loved it(: -Cerri
Holy crap this was so gooood! It's 3:17 in the morning and I am so happy that I discovered this story and read it all the way through because it's gotta be one of the best things I've ever read in my entire life. Like no joke. The way you conveyed the emotions in the story was fantastic and I can honestly say that I was on the brink of crying at some points. Gosh it was just so amazing, I think I might have to re-read it!