Tennessee - Comments

He'll wait. Ooh how romantic. :)

*fans self*

Deny it all yeh want, Ten, we know the truth.

I have no clue how many chapters this is. I didn't want to look. I'm scared I'll end up reading the last one soon. Sigh.

Paul is so nice. BUT I HATE HIM! *I feel really bad haha.

PS: I claim this whole page. Hurray for me!

That night belonged to he and I alone.

Don't forget, and me too! xD

The evil-- he seduced her! Haha. I love Ben.

Oh the devil is so on her side. :) She's going to get herself in a tight knot, that girl.
Not that I wouldn't do that, I'm just saying. Haha.

I love the excitement and suspense this fills me with. You are brill, I say yet again.

July 24 2009. :)
The day I was in the same bus (the fucking seat behind him!) as the guy I love and him actually turning around with this dazzling smile and telling me a joke.
For all I know, I died this day.

LMFAO! "Well. I don't know. Paul got me this job and I guess I just fell in love with him... IT! I mean it!!" I said, my eyes widened and I slapped my forehead for my sudden stupidity.

Pizza. Yesh!

pepperoni pizza. Fuck yesh!

Hoot!
He had to enter her life somehow.
It's pretty (darn it I forgot what I was going to say. sigh.)

I'm loving this! XD

"If you tell me that you don't love me anymore, I'll leave. If you want to spend your time with him, then do it. But tell me, Tennessee. And I'll go. I'll go," his imploring had dropped down to a tortured whisper and his eyes closed on the last words.

Aching heart. Aching heart. Aching heart..

No, the sad part is I cry for both their pains. Alright, I'm not really crying but it did hit me hard. HAH.

I'm not even mad a Ben for doing that.
And I don't believe what he did was right or understandable.
But I still love him. XD

OH MY GOD. *sees Ben Sydney in bold* HIS P.O.V?! *reads*

I thought at first he died, but somewhere in between I contemplated the idea of him leaving.
Didn't really make sense to me at the time but I'm glad to know I was right!

PS: I don't even know where this comment belongs. I remember writing it but for what, totally passes me. >.<

I'm busy and I'm not even in school! Long sigh.

Nice banner. Haha. xD

Whoa. Hurt him? I know what he did, and I'd be pissed too. Thinking of it,
I'm sure I'd do everything she did/will do. But...

I still like Ben and would never want to see him hurt. xD

HOLY FUCK! [I'm strongly against using holy and fuck in the same sentence, let alone side by side.
But I believe this deserves it.]

That was the coolest awkwardish moment yet. I mean, the hand-chest thing? Good for her. [I'm not a fan of revenge but I won't say I don't do.]


"I can't believe you're fucking the café guy."

How dare he?!

The moving in convo - truly enjoyed it. :)

The 'torturing yourself so you can remember feel/touch/kiss' - yesh, I know the feeling . . .

Lyida rocks.
The "I love you" part - my heart did this weird sound.

And I'd kill for a Mary.

PS: I love how you make this so simple to read but you give cool details and use good words.
It's been a long while since I've had that combo. XD

Okay so...not fair on Paul, but I just don't like him.
I'm getting a bad vibe . . .

EDIT: In Paris people think in French? Never crossed my mind. Haha.

"So you like this guy?" Ben asked.
"Oh, please. Are you jealous?" I questioned tentatively.
"No. I mean, yes. I mean... does it matter? Don't. Please, just don't see him, okay?"

Like, can you say AWWWWHHHH!! XD
This was adorable!

I had no –teen in my age anymore. I was teen free!

I've thought of that once. It sounded odd to mention it to people becuz I knew I couldn't quite explain it the way you just did.
Idiot, yes I am. >.<


"This is for you," he muttered in embarrassment and nervously rubbed the back of his neck.
I took it and opened the book. It was full of sketches. Sketches of roses. Sketches of hands. Sketches of me. There was one of me, smiling brightly. There was one of me asleep. I flipped through them with an awed look on my face. My hazel eyes widened as I turned every page. Okay, so I loved this too.

Ben held up a finger and nodded into the phone but mouthed back a, "Wait" to me. I stood at the door for a second. Ben's important call ended and he got up hurriedly and kissed below my ear, "Bye, Tennessee."

Full blown out hit the floor swoon. :)

We neared the subway entrance but Ben stopped. I stopped to look up at him in question. He looked so nervous as he bent down to kiss me. His soft red lips made my knees nearly buckle and I grabbed his neck and pulled him closer to me. He smelled of cologne and pencil dust. His hand moved to the small of my back and there was nothing I could do anymore. How long we stood there, I didn't know.

Ridiculous. Ridiculous. xD I swoon with pride.

"I got you some cider since it seemed like you liked it last night," he stated as he handed me a hot cup.

I grinned and nodded. "Thank you so much," I said and took a small sip.

He smiled a little and I blushed.

"I like how you get tomato red for every little thing," he commented.

I like how some guys notice. I hate blushing! And I'm like, yellow-colored.
(well, that's what my then-five-years-old sister used to say)

"Tell her I have a fashion design degree from Parsons. Tell her I'm dedicated! Tell her I'm awesome! Tell her I'm awesomely dedicated!" I cried as I exited the shop.
Haha, that made me laugh.

He leaned in closer. Our noses were almost touching.

"Because I liked your name."

Cue the ridiculous high school girl sigh here. :)

"No," I said.

"No, you do or yes, you don't?" he said playfully.

Absolutely brill. I love this part. I've always tried (unsuccessfully) to
play someone's mind. And just out of curiosity, which of those answer the question?
Like, should she have said yes or no? ^^'

PS: I hope you don't mind. I have trouble reading the font so I copy it to Word and read it there.

Well, I’ve read a chapter of this, and must I say, the writing: Brilliant. :)
I’m sure I will like it because a good first chapter (I’m even considering that small part at the beginning) means a good story to me.
But I’ve been known to be proved otherwise.
I’ll stick around however. I like how it has an air of mystery to it.

The banner (picture/icon/image) at the top makes this that much cooler. And the Punctuation Is Powerful - I've done that in English. He just gave us the sentence and we had to choose which way it went. I'm extremely proud that I figured out the woman-dominating by myself. I forgot about it (and it pissed me off because it was so amaing) so thank you for jolting my rather fish-like memory.

Oh and must I say, the picture of Ben Sydney (I spelt Sydney four times before getting it right … huh.) totally gorgeous. And bad boy aura: my fave!

PS: Thank Ferosha Coutura, I certainly am. XD

PPS: One percent of why I like this is because of the fact that it is completed. Hah.

PPPS: Stupid boys. They all believe the first one was the only way it went. Sexism really gets my blood boiling.