i like it...im glad she had an epiphany...like, she realized what she is isnt her, and shes going back to who she wants to be =) so pretty much, this is an amazing story, and i cant wait for more =)
Wow, I love everything that you've written so far in this story. It's really interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next! I also really love the background and pictures you put before the start of each chapter, they give off a really cool vibe.
lol, im loving this Ben character, cause thats what he is...a character XP lol..puts a smile on my face :P and UGHHH i wanna know what happened between them...so im gonna basically beg you to update soon =PPP so pleaseee XD
o and btw, i LOVE your pictures, iccons whatever at the top xD like, the mistakes one was cool, and i love it, but this one..OMG i was like HELL YA! i loved it XDDD so awesomeee..i wanna show it to like my english teacher =PP
im liking it a lot, just like all your other stories =) its pretty interesting so far, and i cant wait to learn more about her past, its very intriguing, specifically this Ben character...i really cant wait for more, so please, keep it up =)