Tennessee - Comments

ahhhhh yes shes going to make him payy!!!!
although he sounds soooo sweet :/

& kings of leon?
SO. JEALOUS. : P

this was definately the part of the story i was waiting for...like, i want them back together (sorry paul) but like, at the same time, i totally understand that she cant just take him back, cause of what pain he caused her, and what she did because of him..its like i dont even know, but its really well written, and very dramatic, i love it =D keep up the great work.

o and i love Shel Silversteins poems.. =)

You're welcome for reading and commenting! It's an amazing story!

So hopefully, this comment will make up for the last two chapters I haven't commented on. (I read them on my Ipod, so I couldn't comment!)

AHhhhhhhh Ben is back! Man, I love him. Oh and thank you for changing the font btw. Very much appreciated.

Aww I really hope it all works out for Ben and Tenny in the end. They're too great together. I love how when he came back, he was angry with her for fucking Paul and not at all sad -- like a normal man would be. Coming back after leaving his girl with no note or anything -- or begging for forgiveness. It was straight to the point.

Maybe that's why I'm in love with the man...

I can't wait for Ben and Paul to meet again. Thank you for updating :D

Although I hate seeig Ben hurt, I'm glad Tennessee yelled at him and made him feel guilty. She was right: he is a coward and he deserved it. If Tennessee just accepted him back with open arms, I would be really really mad.

I loved the last line. Loved it. It gives Tennessee a sort of motivation and it makes me really curious as to what's going to happen to them.

Great chapter
It still left me wondering about what's ever going to happen to Ben and Tennessee. Keep it up :)

That was an amazing chapter!!!

ohmygiddygodstrousers! he came back! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg
i think i cried! omg. but but but... damn
:D excellent update!

So, I've seen the start of an amazing day.
I woke up without hitting the snooze button on my alarm once.
The clothes I wanted to wear today are actually clean.
I've made time to eat an amazing breakfast, Trix with Hawaiian Punch.
And I've read three chapters of this story.
Today's going to be an amazing day. : D

Absolutely amazing. I love it!

he cannot be serious
after what he put her through he decides he's the one that should be mad?
no way.
but wow that was an amazing chapter

Ben's back. and I think I love him already even though he is an idiot. Really, how much more entertaining can you get? "I can't believe you're fucking the coffee guy" Not Paul, but "the coffee guy". I broke the cellular deivce in class rule today to read this. well worth the punishment. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

ummm. ya, just gonna go right out and say it.. i dont think you understand how excited i am for this next chapter!! like, holyy. like, theres soo much running through my mind, about whats gonna happen...but ya..i wanna know what he got her...and again, i dont even know what to say other than awesome job, and i cant wait for more...( and for some reason, i was hoping mary was gonna say more..i donno, make him feel guilty, i guess..)

:O
ben's back! ;D

I HATE PAUL. I want Ben and Tennessee to be happy!
But Ben needs to suffer for wat he did.
Ohhh the tragedy.

BEN IS BACK !

I love that last line . : D
I can't wait !
I want to know what happens . : )

New reader here
I absolutely love this story. It's very well written.
More soon I hope

I wonder what's going 2 happen now that ben is back I can't wait for the next part

"I can't believe you're fucking the café guy." <---favorite line
Yes! Ben's back!

that was weird.. as it was building up to her opening the door, my heart started beating faster.. haha.. like i was watching it in a movie or something.

great update.. dun dun dunnnnnn.. what's gonna happen next??? can't waitt!!