First of all... Happy Sweet Sixteen! Second... I don't think you have ever ended a story so well. All loose ends (though few) were tied with a nice little bow and all I can say is... wow. Such an amazing, beautiful, heart-wrenching story. I sincerely think that this has been an inspiration for me with my own problems. I know it's just a story... But out there in our big world? Someone was lucky enough to have this sort of thing happen. You just made it more of a reality for people like us. So to end in a loving way before I start sounding like a stalker or something... Well done. I really do hope to see your stories on book shelves someday.
i found moneymaker first, but this one easily stole my heart.
i would like to say that what i like about your characters is that they are human. they make mistakes, they change their minds a lot, they screw themselves over and the people they love. they hurt get their heart broken and they dont listen to their heart right away or they choose to ignore it but in the end their heart always wins. they always end up with the one they're supposed to be with ( which sounds so Notebook cliche, but i dont care. :D ). it always turns out all right in the end and that's what makes it such a good story. :]
aaand my dear, you are an incredible writer. have a good birthday. you only turn 16 once ;]
Happy early 16th, sug. Hope you have a good one. I think you've just given yourself the best present one can give.
I cannot believe it's over. This story was just so ... Almost magical. Atleast to me. It's very special to me and to anyone who has ever faced the heartbreak of a loved one leaving them. Ben Sydney was the perfect leading man. Tennessee Monroe was the perfect leading lady. I've never quite read about two people more suited for one another. It was a gorgeous story; a beautiful journey. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it.
I love be and tenny. I couldn't believe she chose Ben so quickly over Paul. But I like the ending to the story very much , especially Ben's words about how he "got tattoos." Wonderful story though (:
It is about time that she spoke with her heart. She might have hurt Paul's feelings,but this isn't about what Paul wants but what she wants. She wants Ben.
Omg. "Did that really happen?" Omg. YAY! I love this story so much and hate to see it come to an end, but at the same time I'm like"Hurry up!" lol Fantastic!