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  • Jenni

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    I really liked this... it was fun to read. :D
    July 3rd, 2009 at 05:54pm
  • Slappy

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    Holy snap xD

    Yay for updates!
    July 3rd, 2009 at 09:09am
  • Reality Is Due

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    I know, I know. It's been forever. Almost a year since I last updated. O_O

    But I finally found the time to get this done, so enjoy and feedback is very much appreciated!

    CHAPTER 11
    July 3rd, 2009 at 08:51am
  • Eat Tre's Shoe

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    this story is great! I can't wait till the next chapter! :D
    May 2nd, 2009 at 04:17am
  • Slappy

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    Crucial is a big word :O
    August 17th, 2008 at 05:36am
  • Jenni

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    Poor Pheebs. D:
    August 17th, 2008 at 12:05am
  • whatsername924

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    I havent been on in a while so im sorry for not posting this sooner.
    This chapter was amazing!
    Why is jason's rep so bad!!!??
    update soon I hope
    July 30th, 2008 at 11:04pm
  • Jenni

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    Baaaaad Phoebe, baaaaad.
    July 26th, 2008 at 01:21am
  • Slappy

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    Oh no, she took the pot D:
    July 23rd, 2008 at 09:11am
  • Reality Is Due

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    ^^ Aww, thanks!

    CHAPTER 9

    Didn't I say I'd be updating frequently? ;)
    July 23rd, 2008 at 08:43am
  • Slappy

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    This story is awesome. :file:
    July 3rd, 2008 at 06:19am
  • Reality Is Due

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    Aww hhehe thanks, I feel flattered. :]
    June 30th, 2008 at 07:40am
  • whatsername924

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    Uh oh. Yes please achieve your goal because I really enjoy this story and cant wait to see where it goes.
    update again soon
    June 30th, 2008 at 05:13am
  • Reality Is Due

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    lmfao Why thank you. :]

    Ahh yess I hope so too. *Catches inspiration and writes*
    June 29th, 2008 at 09:37pm
  • Jenni

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    Despite the distractions and what not I still put reading this as top priority.

    I loved it, it was really awesome, and I can't wait for more.

    ...I hope it doesn't take you long. -inspires- 8D
    June 29th, 2008 at 09:36pm
  • Reality Is Due

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    LMFAO I knew it would! That part came to me as I was pacing back and forth in my living room and at first I was going to make Ella say it but then I decided to make Mandy say it in honor of you. :]

    HAHAHA OF COURSE.
    June 29th, 2008 at 08:38pm
  • peacemaker.

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    “Well because y’know, we’re like best friends and y’know, when you go on the road a lot, y’know, you tend to like, y’know…share clothes,” Dad said, raising a room full of eyebrows.

    “Dad, I love you and all but…you say, “Y’know,” way too much it makes me twitch every single time you say it in a sentence,” Mandy said.


    LMFAOLMFAOLMFAO. I FUCKING LOVE YOU, Y'KNOW?

    lmfaolmfao omg that made my day.
    I'm liking this whole Alan thing...a lot ;-)
    I MEAN... WTF.? What happened to Chris?!
    <3333
    Jason is a dick. (:
    June 29th, 2008 at 05:30pm
  • Reality Is Due

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    Aww thank you to everyone on their feedback and condolences for my last update. :] I really appreciate it.

    As promised, I will be updating a lot more often during the summer. As often as I can!

    CHAPTER 8
    June 29th, 2008 at 08:19am
  • Jenni

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    WHAT? I SWEAR I commented on your story.

    SORRRRY. -n-

    I lovvvved this chapter and this whole entire story. C:

    It's opening up to be quite an introcative plot line... ey? ~-
    June 1st, 2008 at 08:06pm
  • nolongerexists

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    If I find out that your little penis was anywhere near my daughter’s womanly part, I’ll hunt you down and cut it off! Dad exclaimed suddenly.

    that made me laugh

    I'm so sorry about your grandpa.
    May 24th, 2008 at 08:20pm