Hold On - Comments

whatsername924:

This was a really good update, but i was waiting for Billie [the drug user he used to be] to smell the pot one her or something.
Ah well. Still a really good update. Sorry to hear about your grandfather.

updated again soon I hope.

This was a really good update, but i was waiting for Billie [the drug user he used to be] to smell the pot one her or something.
Ah well. Still a really good update. Sorry to hear about your grandfather.

updated again soon I hope.

Zomg. :D

Good Job, I read your first story on GSB I i like it alot and I also like this one more soon?

After months of having to put off the story due to excessive amount of homework and writer's block, I've managed to finally finish writing this chapter. This chapter is dedicated to my late grandfather who passed away this past Thursday.

Enjoy!

CHAPTER 7!

I smell sex.

wow I love this story. Update again soon?

It's been nearly two months since I last updated.

Of course, it's the usual. I'm busy with school sometimes and I've been a little uninspired lately. Anywhoo. Thanks to the threatening Joe, I was able to finish up chapter 6, an early Christmas gift for you all.

:shifty I'm glad it took me a while to write this. Some of the attraction in the chapter comes from my experience lately.

Enough about me. Enjoy, bitches. :mrgreen:

CHAPTER 6.

I Love This!!!
More, More , More.
:D

-Lindsay.
xxx;

i like it it's really god

AHH! I FINALLY FOUND IT AGAIN!

*is happeh*

:mrgreen: Thanks, Jenni.

WELLIT'SABOUTTIMETOO.

But it was worth the wait m'dear. <33

Awesome as normal, no doubt in my mind chapter six will also be awesome. :]

CHAPTER 5.

Chapter 6 is in the process of being written as well.

ze-cookie-fairy:

I'm glad it did. You deserve praise.

Aha. Yes. The Catcher in the Rye. When I first read it I ran to my Dad asking "Did you name me after her? Did you? Did you?". Turns out I was actually named after Phoebe in a Shakespearian play ("As You Like It", I think). Bummer :P

Oops. I'd better write something else, or this will look like spam:

I laughed my head off about the period thing. And at Mike's kid.

Wow. Really? Hahah, very cool.

music-lover123:

I love it, it's really good I cant wait for the next chapter

Thanks!

I love it, it's really good I cant wait for the next chapter

I'm glad it did. You deserve praise.

Aha. Yes. The Catcher in the Rye. When I first read it I ran to my Dad asking "Did you name me after her? Did you? Did you?". Turns out I was actually named after Phoebe in a Shakespearian play ("As You Like It", I think). Bummer :P

Oops. I'd better write something else, or this will look like spam:

I laughed my head off about the period thing. And at Mike's kid.

Woot thanks for the comments, you guys!

ze-cookie-fairy:

I love your story. Probably because I have the same first name as the main character XD. You write very realistically, and your dialogue is among the more down-to-earth that I have read.

Just out of interest, where did you get the name "Phoebe" from?

Wow, thanks... that really made my day! :]

The time I got the name Phoebe (even though some of my favorite shows have characters with that name) it was in 7th grade when I was still writing LAII and I was thinking waay ahead to what BJ and Ella's first child would be named. At the same time I was reading Catcher In The Rye and the main character had a sister named Phoebe and haha, I'm not sure. I just knew I'd name her that.

music-is-my-life:

I love it. I have been reading this story for a while but never comment untill now. Write more soon please

Aww well thanks a bunch =].

I love it. I have been reading this story for a while but never comment untill now. Write more soon please

I love your story. Probably because I have the same first name as the main character XD. You write very realistically, and your dialogue is among the more down-to-earth that I have read.

Just out of interest, where did you get the name "Phoebe" from?